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Advantages and disadvantages of living abroad

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Nowadays many people are living abroad. Because they think it’s very comfortable and modern. Easy to say I want to write about the advantages and disadvantages of living abroad. As long as the departure of the country is more than return to the country. It’s not a joyful situation. And damage to the state economy. The advantages of living abroad are many. For example, if you in abroad you appreciate anything and your country too. It helps to appreciate them. And it helps to increase your knowledge. Because there might have quality teachers than your country. Disadvantages of living abroad I think it’s very hard. Because you miss your country, you miss your relatives, close people, and your family. Because you will be far away from them. You can’t embrace them. Other sides are you may not be able to find what you want to eat. It can be concluded that living abroad teaches to you appreciate anything. And also it helps increase your knowledge.
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comfortable and modern. Easy to say I want to write about the advantages and disadvantages of
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is more than return to the
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. It’s not a joyful situation. And damage to the state economy. The advantages of
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you appreciate anything and your
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too. It
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to appreciate them. And it
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to increase your knowledge.
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abroad

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, and your family.
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you will be far away from them. You can’t embrace them. Other sides are you may not be able to find what you want to eat.

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teaches to you appreciate anything. And
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of living abroad

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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