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In the future nobody I will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future nobody I will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? XdeO
Modern technology has evolved a lot and today we can get all the update of what's happening around the world online. I partially agree with the statement that in near future everybody will read newspaper or book online. In this era, where we have access to this applications or websites which render us all the news without any cost. They just ask you to sign in for free. And also there are many website which gives you free subscription to read books online. Now a days we have audible application for books, in this apps you just need to select a book and it will start reading and you just have to listen it. it's a new feature, if people are tired but still they want to complete their reading they can easily completed. But there are still many people who don't like reading online because they feel pain in their eyes and are not comfortable reading from phone. They like to underline words or sentences which they find interesting. Lots of people think spending more time on mobile is not good for their mind and eyes to it makes them weak. so they don't mind spending some money on buying books on newspapers rather than letting their body affect. to conclude in near future people might read from online sources but there will be people that I want to read from printed ones.
Modern technology has evolved a lot and
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today
we can
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get
all the update of what's happening around the world
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online
. I
partially
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agree
with the statement that in near future everybody will
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read
newspaper or
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book
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online
. In this era, where we have access to
Did you mean "these"?
this
applications or websites which render us all the news without any cost. They
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just
ask you to
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sign
in for free. And
also
there are
Possible agreement error. The noun website seems to be countable; consider using: "many websites".
many website
which gives you free subscription to
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read
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books
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online
.
Did you mean "nowadays"?
Now a days
we have audible application for
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books
, in
Did you mean "these"?
this
apps you
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just
need to select a
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book
and it will
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start
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reading
and you
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just
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have to
listen it. it's a new feature, if
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people
are tired
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but
still
they want to complete their
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reading
they can
easily
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completed
.
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But
there are
still
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many
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people
who don't like
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reading
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online
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because
they feel pain in their eyes and are not comfortable
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reading
from phone. They like to underline words or sentences which they find interesting. Lots of
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people
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think
spending more time on mobile is not
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good
for their mind and eyes to it
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makes
them weak.
Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
so
they don't mind spending
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some
money on buying
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books
on newspapers
rather
than letting their body affect.
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to
conclude in near future
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people
might
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read
from
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online
sources
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but
there will be
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people
that I want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
read
from printed ones.
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IELTS essay In the future nobody I will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
234 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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