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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Learning foreign languages is considered as an art that every individual must possess. It is believed that a person should not only be able to speak the foreign language but reading listening and writing is necessarily important. Personally, I agree that acquiring all four skills while studying language is essential for adaptability and success. First, It is important for an individual to have full knowledge of other language is due to the fact that it enables an individual to successfully adapt to the new environment. For example, If an immigrant is able to read, write, speak and write in foreign language he would be able to communicate efficiently with the citizens and as a result would be accepted by the local people easily. Hence, it is very important for an individual to be skilled in all four components of the language to get welcomed in the society. Second, expertise in the foreign language can be a reason of great success and a prosperous life. For instance, if a person is an employee of multinational company which requires frequent coordination with the non-native, doing so effectively by the employer would not only be beneficial for the company but the job holder as well because he may be able to secure his job, have a great impression on his company but also be able to learn new things from the outsiders. To sum up, I strongly believe that one should have command of all components of the language in order to be accepted and have successful life. Nevertheless, having the grip on each component is an art.
Nowadays, Learning
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is considered
as an art that every
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must
possess. It
is believed
that a person should not
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only
be
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able
to speak the
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foreign
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language
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but
reading listening and writing is
necessarily
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important
.
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, I
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agree
that acquiring all four
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skills
while studying
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language
is essential for adaptability and success.

First
, It is
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important
for an
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individual
to have full knowledge of other
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language
is due to the fact that it enables an
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individual
to
successfully
adapt to the new environment.
For example
, If an immigrant is
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able
to read, write, speak and write in
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foreign
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language
he would be
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able
to communicate
efficiently
with the citizens and
as a result
would be
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accepted
by the local
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people
easily
.
Hence
, it is
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very
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important
for an
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individual
to
be skilled
in all four components of the
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language
to
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get
welcomed in the society.

Second, expertise in the
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foreign
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language
can be a reason of great success and a prosperous life.
For instance
, if a person is an employee of multinational
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company
which requires frequent coordination with the non-native, doing
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so
effectively
by the employer would not
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only
be beneficial for the
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company
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but
the job holder
as well
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because
he may be
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able
to secure his job, have a great impression on his
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company
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but
also
be
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able
to learn new things from the outsiders.

To sum up, I
strongly
believe that one should have command of all components of the
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language
in order to be
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accepted
and have successful life.
Nevertheless
, having the grip on each component is an art.
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IELTS essay When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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