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She looks mesmerizing. He got awestruck when he saw her

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Riddhima is a clumsy, bubbly character. She is really beautiful when Vansh saw her for the first time he was awestruck. Their first meeting was coincidence, destiny played its part to make them meet each other. Vansh then decided that she would be his one and only queen. He went out of the way and made her live with him forcefully. She hated him for this. He did all the things to make her fall in love with him and soon she started feeling for Vansh.
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Riddhima
is a clumsy, bubbly character. She is
really
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beautiful
when
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Vansh
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
her for the
first
time he was awestruck. Their
first
meeting was coincidence, destiny played its part to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
each other.
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Vansh
then decided that she would be his one and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
queen. He went out of the way and made her
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with him
forcefully
. She hated him for this. He did all the things to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
her fall in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
with him and
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soon
she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
feeling for
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Vansh
.
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IELTS essay She looks mesmerizing. He got awestruck when he saw her

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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