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People has different opinion on learning foreign language especially when it comes to their children curriculum.

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Language is one of the symbol of culture. People has different opinion on learning foreign language especially when it comes to their children curriculum. In fact, experts encourage students to learn other language during primary schooling rather than secondary schooling. Like in India, many countries in the world included English in pupils academic as primary language from their primary school. Because, technology in today's world majorly have its information in english and people are working with various country people for a particular work, English act as mediator to exchange among them. To illustrate, Software companies in India have their clients in various parts of the earth. To communicate with them people need to know a common language like English where they can easily cope up in a subtle manner. An Article from Hindu, recorded a major concern a why people has to learn their needed language from their childhood days. In addition, a survey data shows Children who learned other language like English, French and German during their young age are more efficient and they have higher fluency and language known which helps them to interact with language native speaker in a better way than students who learned it in short period. on the contrast, People in India give significant important to their language and they believe language is one of their tradition which leads states like Tamil Nadu to concentrate more on their native language rather than other language. Because of learning other language, young people often forget about importance of their native language, which leads the culture and tradition to obscure path. For example, India is diverse country, people in India used Hindi more than their own language because of this condition some part of the India forget about their culture and tradition to be particular culture followed by Biharis were literally gone. To recapitulate, Language is one of the key for culture can be pursuit by their future generation people. Although we have disadvantage, people life style can be changed by learning new language in various ways but only if they learned it and to be influencial like native speaker of the language.
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to their children curriculum. In fact, experts encourage students to learn
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language
during primary schooling
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Like in India,
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many
countries in the world included English in pupils academic as primary
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language
from their primary school.
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Because
, technology in
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today
's world
majorly
have its information in
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english
and
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people
are working with various country
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people
for a particular work, English act as mediator to exchange among them. To illustrate, Software
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companies
in India have their clients in various parts of the earth. To communicate with them
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people
need to know a common
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language
like English where they can
easily
cope up
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in a subtle manner
. An Article from Hindu, recorded a major concern a why
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people
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has
to learn their needed
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language
from their childhood days.
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, a survey data
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shows
Children who learned
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other
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language
like English, French and German during their young age are more
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efficient and
they have higher fluency and
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language
known which
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helps
them to interact with
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language
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native
speaker in a better way than students who learned it in
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short
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the contrast,
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People
in India give significant
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important
to their
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language and
they believe
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language
is one of their tradition which leads states like Tamil Nadu to concentrate more on their
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native
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language
rather
than
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other
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language
.
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of learning
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other
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language
, young
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people
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often
forget about importance of their
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native
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language
, which leads the
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culture
and tradition to obscure path.
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, India is diverse country,
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people
in India
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used
Hindi more than their
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own
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language
because of this
condition
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some
part of the India forget about their
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culture
and tradition to be particular
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culture
followed by
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Biharis
were
literally
gone.

To recapitulate,
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Language
is one of the key for
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culture
can be pursuit by their future generation
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people
.

Although we have disadvantage,
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people
life style can be
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changed
by learning new
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language
in various ways
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but
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only
if they learned it and to be
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influencial
like
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native
speaker of the
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language
.
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IELTS essay People has different opinion on learning foreign language especially when it comes to their children curriculum.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
356 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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