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As science evolves, people’s knowledge of the world expands rapidly. This is due to the discoveries that scientists struggled and spend their most precious time in order to reach them. Some argue that this information is too crucial and noteworthy that it is nonsense to distribute them freely. However, some discuss that it is a duty to spread scientific data and make others knowledgeable about it as much as one can achieve. I highly believe that everybody, such as those in the bussiness and academic world, should be informed about any kind of scientific research. In my opinion, scientific findings should not be kept as a secret for anybody. First of all, developments in science affect quality of life thoroughly. If a nation has good scientists, then people would be blessed with better living standards. However, other countries which do not have successful researchers would be stuck with their poor quality of life if the findings are hidden in more developed nations. Health care and related facilities are highly susceptible to progress further with a rather small finding. To exemplify, one nation can eradicate polio if nationwide spread of vaccines against is well maintained. On top of that, less developed nations would overcome these kind of illnesses if the scientific approach to the lethal diseases would be shared. On the other hand, it is argued that some research outcomes are too crucial to be given out. This might be said because it is thought that evil-minded people would utilize the data for the bad of the people. They might manipulate the information to obtain detrimental results out of it. However, these people would not cease to seek the required data if it is kept hidden. Furthermore, they need to have the necessary tools and equipment to use it. Considering these two are less likely to be met in the same time, it is worthless to keep the scientific data hidden. In conclusion, the spread of the scientific information is vital due to the fact that they enable humanity to achieve better conditions. Besides this, it can be simply told that leaving the world deprived of research results would not stop those who would act atrociously.
As science evolves,
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people’s
knowledge of the world expands
rapidly
. This is due to the discoveries that scientists struggled and spend their most precious time in order to reach them.
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Some
argue that this information is too crucial and noteworthy that it is nonsense to distribute them
freely
.
However
,
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some
discuss that it is a duty to spread
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scientific
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data
and
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make
others knowledgeable about it as much as one can achieve. I
highly
believe that everybody, such as those in the
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bussiness
and academic world, should
be informed
about any kind of
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scientific
research. In my opinion,
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scientific
findings should not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
as a secret for anybody.

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First of all
, developments in science affect quality of life
thoroughly
. If a
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nation
has
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good
scientists, then
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people
would
be blessed
with better living standards.
However
, other countries which do not have successful researchers would
be stuck
with their poor quality of life if the findings
are hidden
in more developed
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nations
. Health care and related facilities are
highly
susceptible to progress
further
with a
rather
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small
finding. To exemplify, one
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nation
can eradicate polio if nationwide spread of vaccines against is well maintained.
On top of that
, less developed
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nations
would overcome
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these kind
of illnesses if the
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scientific
approach to the lethal diseases would
be shared
.

On the other hand
, it
is argued
that
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some
research outcomes are too crucial to be
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given
out. This might
be said
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because
it is
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thought
that evil-minded
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people
would utilize the
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data
for the
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bad
of the
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people
. They might manipulate the information to obtain detrimental results out of it.
However
, these
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people
would not cease to seek the required
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data
if it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
hidden.
Furthermore
, they need to have the necessary tools and equipment to
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use
it. Considering these two are less likely to
be met
in the same time, it is worthless to
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keep
the
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scientific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
hidden.

In conclusion
, the spread of the
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scientific
information is vital due to the fact that they enable humanity to achieve better conditions.
Besides
this, it can be
simply
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told
that leaving the world deprived of research results would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
those who would act
atrociously
.
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Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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