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Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?

Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment? qmo5
Environment protection is one of controversial issues of today’s society. It is known that the energy is restricted by using on daily base. Thus, environment protection is fundamental action according warning of scientists. However, most of people ignore this fact. This essay will shed some light in the factors contributing to these problems and will also suggest some solutions for the same. One of the first problems is irresponsible behavior of the population regarding the environment. To expand that, citizens think that the subsoil of the Earth stores a limitless reserve of minerals resources for generating energy, hence global catastrophe will be avoided. The survey carried out in one of the UK cities showed that the 80% interviewers believed the Earth can produce the energy eternally and this generation will not impact to the environment. A possible solution to this problem would be knowledge campaigns and promotion meetings about correct usage of energy. Thus, the awareness sessions accelerate the movement to protect our climate from overusage of energy. Another problem that needs to be considered that the people are involved to the lifestyle with loaded work schedule. Nowadays, financial concerns are generated the life of the most of population across the globe. Therefore, environment pollution and protection are concerned as low priority issues. One immediate practical solution is allow people to spend time relaxing and encouraging their ability to learn about protection the environment and offering alternative source of energy such as solar and wind power as well as tidal source. For example, according the article from Holland newspaper, the locals from tiny village are actively involved to the projects assisting to promote wind tribune in the region. Undoubtedly, the permanent participation of people in such projects will help improve the environmental situation. To draw the conclusion, public attitude and overworking are one of the main factors of irresponsible behavior regarding environmental protection. However, the government and ordinary people should launch the programs helping us to realize about importance of improving the climate.
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energy
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by using on daily base.
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,
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environment
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protection
is fundamental action according warning of scientists.
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, most of
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people
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ignore
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some
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One of the
first
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problems
is irresponsible behavior of the population regarding the
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environment
. To expand that, citizens
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think
that the subsoil of the Earth stores a limitless reserve of minerals resources for generating
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energy
,
hence
global catastrophe will
be avoided
. The survey carried out in one of the UK cities
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showed
that the 80% interviewers believed the Earth can produce the
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energy
eternally
and this generation will not impact to the
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environment
. A possible solution to this
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problem
would be knowledge campaigns and promotion meetings about correct usage of
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energy
.
Thus
, the awareness sessions accelerate the movement to protect our climate from
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overusage
of energy.

Another
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problem
that needs to
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that the
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people
are involved
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most of population
across the globe.
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,
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environment
pollution and
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protection
are concerned
as low priority issues. One immediate practical solution is
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allow
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people
to spend time relaxing and encouraging their ability to learn about
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protection
the
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environment
and offering alternative source of
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energy
such as solar and wind power
as well
as tidal source.
For example
, according the article from Holland newspaper, the locals from tiny village are
actively
involved to the projects assisting to promote wind tribune in the region.
Undoubtedly
, the permanent participation of
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people
in such projects will
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help
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improve
the environmental situation.

To draw the conclusion, public attitude and overworking are one of the main factors of irresponsible behavior regarding environmental
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protection
.
However
, the
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government
and ordinary
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people
should launch the programs helping us to realize about importance of improving the climate.
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IELTS essay Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?

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