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Science park 2008 and science park today

Science park 2008 and science park today 3xm7X

The two plans show that there have been a number of changes to the science park since 2008. Looking at the plans in more details, it shows that the most noticeable alteration is the construction of the building of Research and development in the position of Grassland. The second big change is the removal of IT centre. This has been replaced by Innovation centre. In addition, there is now a station and University hub which have been added to the science park. On the other hand, Business units and Offices have stayed the same size and in the same location. In contrast, the Reception has been removed. Now car park is in a smaller size, but Cyber security has been expanded and the number of Cycle paths has also been increased. In addition, a bus stop has been included in the science park. Overall, the general design remained the same, Woodland and Railway in the same place, even though certain buildings have been altered and used for different purposes.

The two plans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 that there have been a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to the science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 since 2008. Looking at the plans in more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that the most noticeable alteration is the construction of the building of Research and development in the position of Grassland. The second This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the removal of IT Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. This has been replaced
 by Innovation Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. In addition
, there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a station and University hub which have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. On the other hand
, Business units and Offices have stayed the same size and in the same location. In contrast
, the Reception has been removed
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is in a smaller size, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 Cyber security has been expanded
 and the number of Cycle paths has also
been increased
. In addition
, a bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 has been included
 in the science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Overall
, the general design remained the same, Woodland and Railway in the same place, even though
 certain buildings have been altered
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 purposes. 