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More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress.

More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. yNjb3
The way people work nowadays may well give rise to the popular opinion that work causes stress. However, it is not only work. While work may be a contributing factor, it is not the only cause of stress for people. The pace of life in general nowadays may generate significant feelings of stress. Currently, the modern work environment is very flexible and certainly some comapnies are more demanding in many ways due to increased global competition and the desire to satisfy consumers instantly. This creates the need for fast, flexible working practices in order to respond to such demand. Technology and mobility are possible the greatest drivers of change in the workplace at the moment. The ability to work from home or in the field by accessing data and resources using smartphones, tablets and laptops, means that many people do not have such a structured work schedule anymore. They may be on call or available to their clients or customers for a greater part of each day, thus increasing the pressure to continually perform and maintain efficiency. This can lead to lines blurring between time dedicated to work and leisure time or free time. Often phone calls, texts, or emails are answered in traditionally non-working time. This can create a feeling of never being free from work for some people. However, it is not only work which creates a more dynamic life, and such prevalent stress, for people. Personal activities and family obligations can also add to the feeling of being stressed. It can be equally said that more and more people believe that their lives are generally busier now. The pace of life in general has become quicker in line with the demand for instant gratification and the availability of everything at our fingertips. People have become accustomed to having access to shopping, banking and other daily services round the clock, every day, all year long. This increased dynamism of life can make it more difficult to relax and combat the effects of stress. Most importantly, there are some possible solutions which have been proven to help reduce the feelings of stress, whatever the cause. Regular exercise and spending time on a hobby or other pastime helps people to concentrate on something else and control what they are doing rather than being constantly responding to external factors. A simple massage or visit to a spa can help people feel regenerated and full of vigour, ready to tackle life again with new enthusiasm. Possibly the most important thing a person can do to control the effect of stress on their life is to simply take control and plan their time and activities well to ensure that they are not becoming overworked or overburdened with the everyday activities of life. Planning quiet time to relax, regardless of the activity, will help avoid stress affecting their lives negatively. Overall, a good life-balance between work, personal life, family obligations and other activities is the best solution to ensure good health and wellbeing all round.
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nowadays may well give rise to the popular opinion that
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work
causes
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stress
.
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work
. While
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work
may be a contributing factor, it is not the
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only
cause of
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stress
for
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people
. The pace of
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life
in general
nowadays may generate significant
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feelings
of
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stress
.

Currently
, the modern
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work
environment is
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very
flexible and
certainly
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some
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comapnies
are more demanding in
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many
ways due to increased global competition and the desire to satisfy consumers
instantly
. This creates the need for
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fast
, flexible working practices in order to respond to such demand. Technology and mobility are possible the greatest drivers of
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change
in the workplace at the moment. The ability to
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work
from home or in the field by accessing data and resources using smartphones, tablets and laptops, means that
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many
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people
do not have such a structured
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work
schedule anymore. They may be on call or available to their clients or customers for a greater part of each day,
thus
increasing the pressure to
continually
perform and maintain efficiency. This can lead to lines blurring between
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time
dedicated to
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work
and leisure
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time
or free
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time
.
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Often
phone calls, texts, or emails
are answered
in
traditionally
non-working
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time
. This can create a
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feeling
of never being free from
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work
for
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some
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people
.

However
, it is not
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only
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work
which creates a more dynamic
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life
, and such prevalent
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stress
, for
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people
. Personal
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activities
and family obligations can
also
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add
to the
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feeling
of being
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stressed
. It can be
equally
said that more and more
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people
believe that their
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lives
are
generally
busier
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now
. The pace of
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life
in general
has become quicker in line with the demand for instant gratification and the availability of everything at our fingertips.
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People
have become accustomed to having access to shopping, banking and other daily services round the clock, every day, all year long. This increased dynamism of
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life
can
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make
it more difficult to relax and combat the effects of
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stress
.

Most
importantly
, there are
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some
possible solutions which have
been proven
to
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help
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reduce
the
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feelings
of
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stress
, whatever the cause. Regular exercise and spending
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time
on a hobby or other pastime
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helps
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people
to concentrate on something else and control what they are doing
rather
than being
constantly
responding to external factors. A simple massage or visit to a spa can
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help
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people
feel regenerated and full of
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vigour
, ready to tackle
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life
again with new enthusiasm.
Possibly
the most
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important
thing a person can do to control the effect of
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stress
on their
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life
is to
simply
take control and plan their
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time
and
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activities
well to ensure that they are not becoming overworked or overburdened with the everyday
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activities
of
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life
. Planning quiet
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time
to relax, regardless of the
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activity
, will
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help
avoid
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stress
affecting their
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lives
negatively
.

Overall
, a
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good
life-balance between
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work
, personal
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life
, family obligations and other
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activities
is the best solution to ensure
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good
health and
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wellbeing
all round.
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IELTS essay More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
501 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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