It is sometimes argued that schools should remove non-academic subjects such as music and sports from the syllabus so that students will focus on academic fields which are helpful for their profession. While it is true that academic subjects are important, I do not believe that extremely concentrating on teaching academic subjects is a good idea.
Firstly, from the health point of view, non-academic activities are helpful not only for their physical health but also for mental health. For instance, after studying and sitting in academic classes for the whole morning, it is better for students
to do some outdoor or art activities such as dancing, playing basketball to get rid of stress. As a result, their learning ability and concentration in the afternoon will be improved. Focusing only on the academic area is not only harmful to student’s health but also make their capability decrease.
Secondly, not all of the students need to be excellent in academic subjects to achieve success in their future career. For example, there is no point in getting A grades unnecessarily in science-related subjects if a person wants to become an excellent singer or a footballer. By encouraging students to engage in extra-curricular activities, the school can bring out their hidden talents in other fields. This will help not only the students but also the society since that creates the diversity of occupation.
In conclusion, I do not accept the argument that focusing on only academic subjects is more helpful than non-academic fields for students
in developing their future careers.
It is
sometimes
argued that schools should remove non-academic
subjects
such as music and sports from the syllabus
so
that
students
will focus on
academic
fields which are helpful for their profession. While it is true that
academic
subjects
are
important
, I do not believe that
extremely
concentrating on teaching
academic
subjects
is a
good
idea
.
Firstly
, from the
health
point of view, non-academic activities are helpful not
only
for their physical
health
but
also
for mental
health
.
For instance
, after studying and sitting in
academic
classes for the whole morning, it is better for
students
to
do
some
outdoor or art activities such as dancing, playing basketball to
get
rid of
stress
.
As a result
, their learning ability and concentration in the afternoon will be
improved
. Focusing
only
on the
academic
area is not
only
harmful to
student’s
health
but
also
make
their capability decrease.
Secondly
, not
all of the
students
need to be excellent in
academic
subjects
to achieve success in their future career.
For example
, there is no point in getting
A grades
unnecessarily
in science-related
subjects
if a person wants to become an excellent singer or a footballer. By encouraging
students
to engage in extra-curricular activities, the school can bring out their hidden talents in other fields. This will
help
not
only
the
students
but
also
the society since that creates the diversity of occupation.
In conclusion
, I do not accept the argument that focusing on
only
academic
subjects
is more helpful than non-academic fields for students
in
developing their future careers.