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School pupils should not be limited to taking a specified range of subjects – they should be allowed to study anything they choose.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.

School pupils should not be limited to taking a specified range of subjects – they should be allowed to study anything they choose. ’ How far Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience. 0b91
The impact of limited a specified range of subjects, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. While some people believe that there are solutions, others claim that this can bring problems than benefits. This essay will elaborate both sides of the debate, and thus lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why student should take a specified range of subjects can bring some advantages, but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that pupils can explore their skills and ideas to improve their knowledge to develop skills in their specified area, an instance illustrating this action is the fact that 65 % of students worldwide believe that they should allowed to study anything they choose. Furthermore, school children are motivated and they will not lose their interest about their schooling. Nevertheless, those who disagree with these might have a cogent notion and could assert that students should not be limited to taking a range of subjects. It is largely attributed to the fact they are able to learn effectively if they are happy with their choice. For instance, the article published in the Times magazines, which indicates that the majority of parents have agreed should not be limited their children taking different subjects. Moreover, in my personal point of view Algebra is quite important to study in this field, therefore, student would be able to use it in their daily lives. In conclusion, while there are strong arguments both sides of the debate, I strongly believe that students should allowed to choose any subjects that they are preferred to study in order to avoid shortcomings.
The impact of limited a specified range of
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subjects
, which was always debatable, has
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now
become more controversial. While
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some
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people
believe that there are solutions, others claim that this can bring problems than benefits. This essay will elaborate both sides of the debate, and
thus
lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why
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student
should take a specified range of
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subjects
can bring
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some
advantages,
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but
the most preponderant one lies in the fact that pupils can explore their
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skills
and
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ideas
to
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improve
their knowledge to develop
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skills
in their specified area, an instance illustrating this action is the fact that 65 % of
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students
worldwide
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believe
that they should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "allow"
allowed
to study anything they choose.
Furthermore
, school children are
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motivated and
they will not lose their interest about their schooling.

Nevertheless
, those who disagree with these might have a cogent notion and could assert that
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students
should not
be limited
to taking a range of
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subjects
. It is
largely
attributed to the fact they are able to learn
effectively
if they are happy with their choice.
For instance
, the article published in the Times magazines, which indicates that the majority of parents have
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agreed
should not
be limited
their children taking
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different
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subjects
.
Moreover
, in my personal point of view Algebra is quite
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important
to study in this field,
therefore
,
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student
would be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it in their daily
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lives
.

In conclusion
, while there are strong arguments both sides of the debate, I
strongly
believe that
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students
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "allow"
allowed
to choose any
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subjects
that they
are preferred
to study in order to avoid shortcomings.

IELTS essay School pupils should not be limited to taking a specified range of subjects – they should be allowed to study anything they choose. ’ How far Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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