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School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.6

School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. v. 6
It is believed that teachers are the prime source of education for primary school and university students, and they reap the best knowledge at educational institutions rather than other methods such as world-wide-web and television. I agree with this notion to a certain extent because human interaction plays a vital role in learning. However, technology has become an indispensable part of the study for several reasons. To embark upon, undeniably, a person attains real-life expertise from the teachers as being experienced individuals, they can make their pupils understand crucial lessons with ease by giving real-life examples. Moreover, when it comes to learning, every person has a different cognitive level. So a professor can teach every student according to their level of digesting knowledge which a machine or internet can not do. Not to mention that study at the school is two-way communication where a learner can ask questions to clear their doubts, While it is impossible in the case of technologies. For instance, if cyber-space and television are the best teachers, most of the people in this world would be well educated. On the other hand, the internet has proved to be a boon for students as it is a sea of information. Although they can not obtain comprehensive knowledge from the world-wide-web, there are myriad of websites and videos available online that assist them for preparing college projects as well as exams. Not only this but also children learn several real-life lessons from the television reality shows and start observing various thinks from a very young age. To cite an example here, these days, there are many television shows that are specially designed for children learning. To conclude, despite the fact that the internet and television keep students abreast of numerous useful information and are the source of various topics, the significance of human communication is invincible for grasping lessons.
It
is believed
that teachers are the prime source of education for primary school and university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
, and they reap the best knowledge at educational institutions
rather
than other methods such as world-wide-web and
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television
. I
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agree
with this notion to a certain extent
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because
human interaction plays a vital role in learning.
However
, technology has become an indispensable part of the study for several reasons.

To embark upon,
undeniably
, a person attains real-life expertise from the teachers as
being experienced
individuals, they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their pupils understand crucial lessons with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
by giving real-life examples.
Moreover
, when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to learning, every person has a
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different
cognitive level.
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So
a professor can teach every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
according to their level of digesting knowledge which a machine or internet can not do. Not to mention that study at the school is two-way communication where a learner can ask questions to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
their doubts, While it is impossible in the case of technologies.
For instance
, if cyber-space and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
are the best teachers, most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in this world would be
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well educated
.

On the other hand
, the internet has proved to be a boon for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
as it is a sea of information. Although they can not obtain comprehensive knowledge from the world-wide-web, there are myriad of websites and videos available online that assist them for preparing college projects
as well
as exams. Not
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only
this
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but
also
children learn several real-life lessons from the
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television
reality
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shows
and
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start
observing various
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thinks
from a
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very
young age. To cite an example here, these days, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that are
specially
designed for children learning.

To conclude
, despite the fact that the internet and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
abreast of numerous useful information and are the source of various topics, the significance of human communication is invincible for grasping lessons.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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