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saving is a good habit for an individual after retirement . do u agree or disagree? Give reasons and relevant examples in favour of your statement.

saving is a good habit for an individual after retirement. do u agree or disagree? Give reasons and relevant examples in favour of your statement. r8Gnl
A penny saved in a penny earned. It is true that saving is wiseful and practical and can help to humankind future expenditure. I do not agree that saving after retirement is quite convenient for persona. However, I believe that human being should save money during the early year of their employment. To begin with, people after retirement do not have any permanent jobs which are the main sources of regular income and savings. All retired people, for example, in most of the developing and underdeveloped countries such as India, Bangladesh, Sri_Lanka etc can not manage jobs. As a consequence, they have to maintain their lives with the amount of money that have got as pansion and in the form of other retirement benefits and these hardly scope for them to save any amount. Although, some diseases make nest in their bodies as they grow old which make them delicate. Therefore, they have to run after doctor very frequently let alone engage work. Consequently, they have to allocate good chunk of their money for health care purposes which certainly limit their savings. Retired people, moreover, are expected to spend their times with family members which they cannot do the same while working at work. On the other hand, saving after retirement has had a positive impact for some skilled senior citizens in the society. Retired people, in fact, are free from family expenditure as their children have grown up by the time when they retire from the jobs. As their expenditure largely reduce that result they can concentrate on savings. Some professionals, for instance, namely doctors, engineers and so on can engage themselves in part time jobs as welll as full time work. People who can earn handsome amount of money after retiring from job can concentrate of savings. To conclude, savings after retirement is thoroughly impractical and nonsensical indeed, as people get old, bored, tired and miss opportunities of getting on engaged themselves in money generating jobs.
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wiseful
and practical and can
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help
to humankind future expenditure. I do not
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that
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saving
after
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retirement
is quite convenient for persona.
However
, I believe that human being should save
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money
during the early year of their employment.

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with,
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people
after
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retirement
do not have any permanent
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jobs
which are the main sources of regular income and
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savings
. All retired
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people
,
for example
, in most of the developing and underdeveloped countries such as India, Bangladesh,
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Sri_Lanka
etc can not manage
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jobs
. As a consequence, they
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have to
maintain their
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lives
with the amount of
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money
that have
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got
as
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pansion
and in the form of other
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retirement
benefits and these hardly scope for them to save any amount. Although,
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some
diseases
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make
nest in their bodies as they grow
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old
which
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make
them delicate.
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, they
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have to
run after doctor
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very
frequently
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let
alone engage work.
Consequently
, they
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have to
allocate
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good
chunk of their
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money
for health care purposes which
certainly
limit their
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savings
. Retired
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people
,
moreover
, are
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expected
to spend their
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times
with family members which they cannot do the same while working at work.

On the other hand
,
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saving
after
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retirement
has had a
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positive
impact for
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some
skilled senior citizens in the society. Retired
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people
, in fact, are free from family expenditure as their children have grown up by the
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time
when they retire from the
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jobs
.
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their expenditure
largely
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reduce
that result they can concentrate on
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savings
.
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Some
professionals,
for instance
,
namely
doctors, engineers and
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so
on can engage themselves in part
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time
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jobs
as
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welll
as full
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work.
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People
who can earn handsome amount of
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money
after retiring from
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job
can concentrate of savings.

To conclude
,
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savings
after
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retirement
is
thoroughly
impractical and nonsensical
indeed
, as
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people
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get
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old
, bored, tired and miss opportunities of getting on engaged themselves in
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money
generating
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jobs
.
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IELTS essay saving is a good habit for an individual after retirement. do u agree or disagree? Give reasons and relevant examples in favour of your statement.

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