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Sahaaaaaaaaarrrrrr Movies are popular all around the world? Why movies are so popular?

Sahaaaaaaaaarrrrrr Movies are popular all around the world? Why movies are so popular? LrEoG
Once newspapers and books were most popular and people got used to buying and reading at least some of them each week. But, in the modern time, with improving in moviemaking industry, the public prefer to watch movies rather than reading books or doing other amusing work so that movies could become the most popular. In fact, today the public make they amused and aware of the surrounding world by watching movies at the cinema or on the TV and on the computer. From my idea, although there are various reasons for being more common of the movies, the most principal ones are that movies are conveni. . .
Once newspapers and books were most popular and
people
got
used
to buying and reading at least
some
of them each week.
But
, in the modern time, with improving in
moviemaking
industry, the public prefer to
watch
movies
rather
than reading books or doing other amusing work
so
that
movies
could become the most popular. In fact,
today
the public
make
they amused and aware of the surrounding world by watching
movies
at the cinema or on the TV and on the computer. From my
idea
, although there are various reasons for being more common of the
movies
, the most principal ones are that
movies
are
conveni
.
.
.
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IELTS essay Sahaaaaaaaaarrrrrr Movies are popular all around the world? Why movies are so popular?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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