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37: IS technology always good!

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Nowadays technology has been one the most crucial factors in people’s lives. Doubtless, technology has influenced our lives in many aspects. Evolving lives and getting more complicated, technologies and new investments are employed to make our lives better and easier. Like most of other things, such as medicines, technologies have some side effects. Seemingly, it is useful also detrimental in some views. I am certain that, the advantages are far outweighing disadvantages. Therefore, I believe that, the statement of " Technology Is Always Good" is true. I will Explain my arguments in next paragraphs. First reason for being agreed with this statement is great improvements in medical. Technology helps people to live healthier, easier, and longer. In the past, due to, lack of medical equipments and low quality of medicines doctors could not defense patients against deadly illnesses. But now, it appears that, thanks technology people can be victorious over their stronger rival, and ignore mortal disease. As an instance, fifty years ago, most of newly burned Childs lost their lives because of Smallpox. However, today doctors know how to cure this illness and save Children. Therefore, I believe technology helped us to live better, with stress less challenge for survive. Second reason for consenting statement of goodness of technology, is communication and keeping in touch. These days, people are distributed among the worldwide. Certainly friends and families are far from each other, and probably, it is not only difficult but also it might be harmful sometimes. For example, imagine, having son living abroad is how struggle for his parents, thanks God helping technology kipped in touch this family. Therefore, I am positive that, technology coincide some detrimental helps us for living better. It seems to me that, I am definitely agreeing this statement. Supporting my idea, I mentioned majestic improvements in advance medicine, in addition extraordinary tools that help us to make constant connection with our relatives. Thus, I believe technology made our lives much better along some disadvantages.
Nowadays
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. Doubtless,
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technology
has influenced our
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lives
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aspects. Evolving
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and getting more complicated,
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technologies
and new investments
are employed
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make
our
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lives
better and easier. Like most of other things, such as medicines,
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technologies
have
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some
side effects.
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also
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some
views. I am certain that, the advantages are far outweighing disadvantages.
Therefore
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is great improvements in medical.
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Technology
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helps
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to
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healthier, easier, and longer. In the past, due to, lack of medical equipments and low quality of medicines doctors could not defense patients against deadly illnesses.
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now
, it appears that, thanks
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technology
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can be victorious over their stronger rival, and
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ignore
mortal disease. As an instance, fifty years ago, most of
newly
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Childs
lost their
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lives
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However
,
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today
doctors know how to cure this illness and save Children.
Therefore
, I believe
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technology
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helped
us to
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live
better, with
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stress
less challenge for survive.

Second reason for consenting
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of goodness of
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, is communication and keeping in touch. These days,
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people
are distributed
among the worldwide.
Certainly
friends and families are far from each other, and
probably
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difficult
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also
it might be harmful
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technology
kipped in touch this family.
Therefore
, I am
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positive
that,
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technology
coincide
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some
detrimental
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helps
us for living better.

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am definitely agreeing
this
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. Supporting my
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idea
, I mentioned majestic improvements in advance medicine,
in addition
extraordinary tools that
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help
us to
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make
constant connection with our relatives.
Thus
, I believe
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technology
made our
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lives
much better along
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some
disadvantages.
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IELTS essay 37: IS technology always good!

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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