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Technology is always good?

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Once, by using technology, mankind could be able to make the life better and easier on the earth. But, it is difficult to express that technology is always good today. To be perfectly frank, I am extremely opposed to this statement. The earth is getting hurt by the all proceedings called technology. With the uses of the biological and physical resources, the earth has brought into a dangerous condition. On the other hand, technology, however, is companied by emitting lots of pollution to the nature. First of all, the earth is depleting of the physical sources such as grounds, natural fuels, . . .

Once, by using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
, mankind could be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the life better and easier on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, it is difficult to express that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 is always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. To be perfectly
 frank, I am extremely
 opposed to this statement. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
 is getting hurt by the all proceedings called You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
. With the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 of the biological and physical resources, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
 has brought into a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 condition. On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
, however
, is Possible spelling mistake found.companies
companied
 by emitting lots of pollution to the nature.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
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