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Technology is always good?

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Once, by using technology, mankind could be able to make the life better and easier on the earth. But, it is difficult to express that technology is always good today. To be perfectly frank, I am extremely opposed to this statement. The earth is getting hurt by the all proceedings called technology. With the uses of the biological and physical resources, the earth has brought into a dangerous condition. On the other hand, technology, however, is companied by emitting lots of pollution to the nature. First of all, the earth is depleting of the physical sources such as grounds, natural fuels, . . .
Once, by using
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technology
, mankind could be able to
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make
the life better and easier on the
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earth
.
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But
, it is difficult to express that
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technology
is always
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good
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today
. To be
perfectly
frank, I am
extremely
opposed to this statement. The
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earth
is getting hurt by the all proceedings called
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technology
. With the
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uses
of the biological and physical resources, the
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earth
has brought into a
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dangerous
condition.
On the other hand
,
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technology
,
however
, is
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companied
by emitting lots of pollution to the nature.

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First of all
, the
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earth
is depleting of the physical sources such as grounds, natural fuels
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IELTS essay Technology is always good?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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