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Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes- the government or the people who build the homes?

Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes- the government or the people who build the homes? w52d
The population of the world is increasing and so does the needs for more houses, commercial buildings and other constructions are escalating as well. The high rising buildings constructions, wood-house constructions etc. require more safety & standard issues while this is being violated often and accidents related to building constructions are increasing. Some people opine that Government is solely responsible to ensuring the safety and codes while others believe that house owners are the persons who should be responsible. In my opinion, a government has a role in setting the rules and following it but it the owners and authority of the building owners who should ensure the standard and safety while constructing the houses and commercial buildings. First of all, it is out of the scope for the government to appoint necessary manpower and monitoring system in every place where the construction works would occur. Before building any house, people must take the permission from the authority and build the house accordingly. But any accident occurs due to the lack of safety procedure; improper use of tools and materials, unskilled labour, unnecessary rush would be because of the owner’s failure to comply the codes. The workers, who work for contractions; including the architect, engineer and labour, should know the safety rules and codes and also should protest when they believe that a rule might have been violated and ignored. The labours should never assent to work in a position which is harmful and risky for them, the engineers should maintain the strict rules instead of blindly following the construction owners order and the local authority should time to time monitor the constructions to avoid the hazards. In conclusion, the Government does not have the necessary scope to monitor each & every construction in a country and the house owners must know the safety procedures, standards and rules to make sure the safety.
The population of the world is increasing and
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so
does the needs for more
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houses
, commercial
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buildings
and other
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constructions
are escalating
as well
. The high rising
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buildings
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constructions
, wood-
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house
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constructions
etc. require more
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safety
& standard issues while this is
being violated
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often
and accidents related to
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building
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constructions
are increasing.
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people
opine that
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Government
is
solely
responsible to ensuring the
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safety
and codes while others believe that
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house
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owners
are the persons who should be responsible. In my opinion, a
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government
has a role in setting the
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rules
and following it
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but
it the
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owners
and authority of the
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building
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owners
who should ensure the standard and
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safety
while constructing the
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houses
and commercial buildings.

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, it is out of the scope for the
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government
to appoint necessary manpower and monitoring system in every place where the
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construction
works would occur.
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Before
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building
any
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house
,
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people
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must
take the permission from the authority and build the
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house
accordingly
.
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But
any accident occurs due to the lack of
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safety
procedure; improper
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use
of tools and materials, unskilled
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labour
, unnecessary rush would be
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because
of the
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owner’s
failure to comply the codes.

The workers, who work for contractions; including the architect, engineer and
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labour
, should know the
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safety
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rules
and codes and
also
should protest when they believe that a
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rule
might have
been violated
and
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ignored
. The
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labours
should never assent to work in a position which is harmful and risky for them, the engineers should maintain the strict
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rules
instead
of
blindly
following the
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construction
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owners
order and the local authority should time to time monitor the
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constructions
to avoid the hazards.

In conclusion
, the
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Government
does not have the necessary scope to monitor each & every
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construction
in a country and the
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house
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owners
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must
know the
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safety
procedures, standards and
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rules
to
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make
sure the
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safety
.
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IELTS essay Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes- the government or the people who build the homes?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
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