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Research sayes that online meetings is important or offline meetings is important .do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages.

Research sayes that online meetings is important or offline meetings is important. do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages. YpnK
Despite a few positive aspects of online meetings, there are some adverse points also. One approach is that, individuals can loose their communication skills because they do notany facial communication via online meeting. Second approach is that people do not learn new things except office work, Whereas when they visit office they learn a lot of skills also. Therefore, masses not only loose communication skills but also forget some social skills.
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their communication
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IELTS essay Research sayes that online meetings is important or offline meetings is important. do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages.

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