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Fossil Fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels.

Fossil Fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels. qj7P
Fossil Fuel is an important natural resource that is greatly used by humans for electrical energy, powering industry, and fuelling transportation. Unfortunately, fossil fuels will soon be exhausted due to its high demand from many industries. This essay will discuss how to prevent non-renewable resource from depletion by using renewable energy and to use natural forces as an alternative to generate power. It is believed that in the future, the supply of fossil fuels could no longer meet the demand of many industries that hugely benefit from it. The criticality of conserving non-renewable resources by using more renewable energy is a responsibility of every human in the world. With the use of renewable energy, such as solar panels and windmills to generate electricity, can produce great benefits not just in our planet, but as well as the health of many people around the world. Furthermore, using renewable energy can also be a great investment as it helps the energy cost to go down in every households. There are many alternatives that can be used aside from fossil fuels that are more efficient in the environment. The most sustainable alternative is the use of natural elements such as solar energy and wind power. The sun and wind power are two of the most renewable energy as it is always available in our everyday life. To illustrate, several small and big enterprises are slowing converting to solar energy as it is more cost-efficient in producing power. Moreover, highly developed nations in Europe are also starting to use wind power in their certain parts of their region as it is more sustainable, and at the same time, can also attract tourist due to its massive and attractive wind power structures. In conclusion, fossil fuels are greatly used in today’s world but there will come a time that it will be greatly diminished due to its vitality of producing electricity, oil, and gas. It is essential that every person should learn how to conserve non-renewable resources and start using more of the renewable energy which is available for our perusal. At the same time, we should keep on finding substitutes for fossil fuels, like solar and wind power, to enable us to produce more energy and meet the demands of our growing population.
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resource
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used
by humans for electrical
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, powering industry, and fuelling transportation. Unfortunately,
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fossil
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fuels
will
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soon
be exhausted
due to its high demand from
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industries. This essay will discuss how to
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prevent
non-renewable
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resource
from depletion by using
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energy
and to
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use
natural forces as an alternative to generate power.

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is believed
that in the future, the supply of
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fossil
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fuels
could no longer
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meet
the demand of
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many
industries that
hugely
benefit from it. The criticality of conserving non-renewable resources by using more
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renewable
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energy
is a responsibility of every human in the world. With the
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use
of
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renewable
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energy
, such as
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solar
panels and windmills to generate electricity, can produce great benefits not
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in our planet,
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as well
as the health of
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many
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people
around the world.
Furthermore
, using
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renewable
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energy
can
also
be a great investment as it
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helps
the
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cost to go down in every
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households
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many
alternatives that can be
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used
aside from
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fossil
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fuels
that are more efficient in the environment. The most sustainable alternative is the
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use
of natural elements such as
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solar
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energy
and
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wind
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power
. The sun and
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wind
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power
are two of the most
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renewable
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energy
as it is always available in our everyday life. To illustrate, several
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small
and
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big
enterprises are slowing converting to
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solar
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energy
as it is more cost-efficient in producing
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power
.
Moreover
,
highly
developed nations in Europe are
also
starting to
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use
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wind
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power
in their certain parts of their region as it is more sustainable, and at the same time, can
also
attract tourist due to its massive and attractive
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wind
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power
structures.

In conclusion
,
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a time that it will be
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diminished due to its vitality of producing electricity, oil, and gas. It is essential that every person should learn how to conserve non-renewable resources and
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start
using more of the
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renewable
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energy
which is available for our perusal. At the same time, we should
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keep
on finding substitutes for
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fuels
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wind
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power
, to enable us to produce more
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energy
and
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meet
the demands of our growing population.
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IELTS essay Fossil Fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
379 words
6.0
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