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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. baYg
Abortion is killing life in the womb before it is born. In the major part of world, people believe that abortion should be legal and it is a birthright of every woman while others oppose it and should be illegalized and should be stopped immediately. This essay will discuss that it should legal or illegal to do abortions. In this modern world, everyone wants a better life. Women are competing with men and they are also highly ambitious and don't want burdens in their life of raising a child, so if there is any unwanted pregnancy they prefer abortion because having a child will be an obstacle in their progress. A recent study in India has shown a 50% increase in the abortion rate from the time when women have started working in the last decade. Furthermore, in this competitive world, women who would not be able to bear the cost of raising a child will prefer abortion rather than bringing life in the world which will struggle to make their end meets and will live in a poverty. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of Abortion. Firstly, it will affect women both physically and mentally. For illustration, a person affected emotionally and will be depressed for killing life and physically there will be a complex problem in the body like an infection in the uterus, blood clotting, and maybe a uterus cancer. In conclusion, depends on the situation what a person wants in their life and how they want upbringing of their child and they want to remain single. I would suggest that it should be legalized because it will be better to kill a life before it born and facing the challenges in this cruel world
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Abortion
is killing
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life
in the womb
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before
it
is born
. In the major part of
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world
,
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people
believe that
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abortion
should be legal and it is a birthright of every woman while others oppose it and should
be illegalized
and should be
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stopped
immediately. This essay will discuss that it should legal or illegal to do abortions.

In this modern
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world
, everyone
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wants
a better
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life
.
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Women
are competing with
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men and
they are
also
highly
ambitious and don't
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want
burdens in their
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life
of raising a
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child
,
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so
if there is any unwanted pregnancy they prefer
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abortion
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because
having a
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child
will be an obstacle in their progress. A recent study in India has shown a 50% increase in the
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abortion
rate from the time when
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women
have
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started
working in the last decade.
Furthermore
, in this competitive
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world
,
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women
who would not be able to bear the cost of raising a
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child
will prefer
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abortion
rather
than bringing
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life
in the
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world
which will struggle to
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make
their
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end
meets and will
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live
in a poverty.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
disadvantages of
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Abortion
.
Firstly
, it will affect
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women
both
physically
and mentally. For illustration, a person
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affected
emotionally
and will
be depressed
for killing
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life
and
physically
there will be a complex problem in the body like an infection in the uterus, blood clotting, and maybe a uterus cancer.

In conclusion
, depends on the situation what a person
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wants
in their
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life
and how they
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want
upbringing of their
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child and
they
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want
to remain single. I would suggest that it should
be legalized
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because
it will be better to kill a
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life
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before
it born and facing the challenges in this cruel
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world
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IELTS essay Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.

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  American English
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