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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion? xNm1
It has been commonly observed that the modern methods of shopping have changed the lives of customers to a great extent. Nowadays, people can buy most of their stuff online without visiting actual physical stores which definitely is a blessing in this pandemic time. This essay completely agrees with the idea of online shopping and would discuss its benefits in detail. To begin with, with the improvement in technology, there has been development of various online platforms that helps people to buy and get their product delivered at home as quick as possible. In other words, one can go to various websites online, find the right product for them, and can get it delivered on the vary next day using expedited delivery methods from the comfort of their home. This not only saves their time as they don’t have to visit actual store, but also offers them a wide range of options to choose from. Thus, online shopping has made the life of shoppers easier and comfortable. Another reason which makes people shift their interest from traditional shopping to online shopping is the extended return policies of the sellers. That is to say, online sellers such as Amazon, Ebay, BestBuy and many more gains trust of their customers by offering extended return policies where customer can get full refund if they did not like the product or if its defective, regardless of it’s being used or brand new within the three months of their purchase. This is definitely helpful for people who cannot rely on online products as they have right to return their product within specified time frame. To exemplify. according to a survey conducted by amazon in 2020, 98% people confirmed that they prefer online shopping from amazon because of their extended return policies and reliable customer service. To conclude, I believe that the development of online selling platforms has made the life of customers easier and comfortable along with saving their time.
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commonly
observed that the modern methods of
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shopping
have
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changed
the
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lives
of
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customers
to a great extent. Nowadays,
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people
can
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buy
most of their stuff
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online
without visiting actual physical stores which definitely is a blessing in this pandemic
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time
. This essay completely
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agrees
with the
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idea
of
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online
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shopping
and would discuss its benefits in detail.

To
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begin
with, with the improvement in technology, there has been development of various
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online
platforms that
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helps
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people
to
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buy
and
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get
their
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product
delivered at home as quick as possible.
In other words
, one can go to various websites
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online
, find the right
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product
for them, and can
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get
it delivered on the
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vary
next
day using expedited delivery methods from the comfort of their home. This not
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only
saves their
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time
as they don’t
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have to
visit actual store,
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but
also
offers them a wide range of options to choose from.
Thus
,
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online
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shopping
has made the life of shoppers easier and comfortable.

Another reason which
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makes
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people
shift their interest from traditional
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shopping
to
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online
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shopping
is the extended
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return
policies of the sellers.
That is
to say,
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online
sellers such as Amazon,
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Ebay
,
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BestBuy
and
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many
more gains trust of their
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customers
by offering extended
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return
policies where
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customer
can
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get
full refund if they did not like the
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product
or if its defective, regardless of it’s being
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used
or brand new within the three months of their
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purchase
. This is definitely helpful for
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people
who cannot rely on
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online
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products
as they have right to
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return
their
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product
within specified
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time
frame. To exemplify.
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according
to a survey conducted by
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amazon
in 2020, 98%
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people
confirmed that they prefer
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online
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shopping
from
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amazon
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because
of their extended
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return
policies and reliable
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customer
service.

To conclude
, I believe that the development of
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online
selling platforms has made the life of
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customers
easier and comfortable along with saving their
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time
.
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IELTS essay New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
6.0
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