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Recent research suggest that majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crime after they are released. Waht are the cause and solution for this problem

Recent research suggest that majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crime after they are released. Waht are the cause and solution for this problem 6aWAl
Indubitably, crime is one of the most pressing issue which is faced by modern society. Many a man believe that, numerois of criminals commit crime after the releasement from the prison. In forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss its causes and explain the solution to tackle this strenuous problem. To commence with, there are various reasons which are responsible for inclinement of crime rate in the society. First and foremost reason is poverty. The reason bieng, most of criminal belong from poor family and when they are released which in turn they donot get any type of financial support to fulfill their basic needs due to which the minds of culprits allure to commit crimes for getting income. Moreover, the other main factor is socially unacceptable by the community after the releasement from jail. Owing to the fact, people see them only as a criminal and will change their behaviour towards that person which in turn criminals think that, they got missed everything and the life of criminal is much better then real life. Resultantly, crime rates are increasing with passage of time. Fortunately, there are also various solution to handle this main problem. Firstly, government should provide few money to prisoners after they are released which help them to cope with inflation for a few days. Such as, administration of London give few amount of money to criminals and it will help them to reduce the crimes from their country. Secondly, the schools and universities should aware children about the detrimental effects of crimes and also start extra lecture in which they should give knowledge to children, how they cope with financial crisis? which is also work as a motivaton. To conclude, many criminals reoffend due to economic and social problems and government should take some decisive action to manage it. I reckon that, people deal with polite and calm way with criminals after their releasement. So, they are continue their better life again.
Indubitably
,
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crime
is one of the most pressing issue which
is faced
by modern society.
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a
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man
believe that,
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numerois
of
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criminals
commit
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crime
after the
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releasement
from the prison. In forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss its causes and
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explain
the solution to tackle this strenuous problem.

To commence with, there are various reasons which are responsible for
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inclinement
of
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crime
rate in the society.
First
and foremost reason is poverty. The reason
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bieng
, most of
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criminal
belong from poor family and when they
are released
which in turn they
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donot
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get
any type of financial support to fulfill their basic needs due to which the minds of culprits allure to commit
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crimes
for getting income.
Moreover
, the other main factor is
socially
unacceptable by the community after the
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releasement
from jail. Owing to the fact,
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people
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them
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as a
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criminal
and will
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change
their
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behaviour
towards that person which in turn
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criminals
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think
that, they
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got
missed everything and the life of
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criminal
is much
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better then
real life.
Resultantly
,
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crime
rates are increasing with passage of time.

Fortunately
, there are
also
various solution to handle this main problem.
Firstly
,
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government
should provide
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few money
to prisoners after they
are released
which
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help
them to cope with inflation for a few days. Such as, administration of London give
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few amount
of money to
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criminals
and it will
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help
them to
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reduce
the
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crimes
from their country.
Secondly
, the schools and universities should aware children about the detrimental effects of
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crimes
and
also
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start
extra lecture in which they should give knowledge to children, how they cope with financial crisis?
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which
is
also
work as a
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motivaton
.

To conclude
,
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many
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criminals
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reoffend
due to economic and social problems and
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government
should take
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some
decisive action to manage it. I reckon that,
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people
deal with polite and calm way with
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criminals
after their
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releasement
.
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So
, they are
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continue
their better life again.
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IELTS essay Recent research suggest that majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crime after they are released. Waht are the cause and solution for this problem

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