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Reasons for animals and sea animals are in danger

Reasons for animals and sea animals are in danger 26xJJ
There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. The situation is understandable, and measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problems. There are two main reasons why animals are disappearing. Firstly, in many parts of the world trees are being cut down to make way for farmland on which to grow crops and keep animals.
There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being
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destroyed
and whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. The situation is understandable, and measures could
certainly
be taken
to tackle the problems. There are two main reasons why animals are disappearing.
Firstly
, in
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many
parts of the world trees are being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down to
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make
way for farmland on which to grow crops and
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keep
animals.

IELTS essay Reasons for animals and sea animals are in danger

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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