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Reasons for animals and sea animals are in danger

Reasons for animals and sea animals are in danger 26xJJ

There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. The situation is understandable, and measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problems. There are two main reasons why animals are disappearing. Firstly, in many parts of the world trees are being cut down to make way for farmland on which to grow crops and keep animals.

There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. The situation is understandable, and measures could certainly
be taken
 to tackle the problems. There are two main reasons why animals are disappearing. Firstly
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 parts of the world trees are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for farmland on which to grow crops and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 animals. 