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Now we can see the difference of opinion between children and parents is evident when we reach puberty. Young children, no matter how close they are to their families, when they grow up, their parents still don't fully understand their children and when looking back, the gap between the two generations will be very far over time. First, parents and children today often do not have much time to share and confide together. Having little time to interact with children will make it impossible for parents to fully understand what their children are thinking, and in retrospect, the gap between the two generations is too far to be resolved with a few conversations. quick story.
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, no matter how close they are to their families, when they grow up, their
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are thinking, and in retrospect, the gap between the two generations is too far to
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IELTS essay reality in generation gap

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
115 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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