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Proposal for hosting a Movie Awards Ceremony in Shiraz for the first time.

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Due to lack of experience over holding such these awards, we can not risk our city's praise which means we are not able to present it in every format and if will be wrecked up it can be spiced Shiraz's resume up with the inability to manage. We would cope with this obstacle by making an effort to consider the similar experience in other cities and their plans can be replicated in some parts. Implementing the other cities expertise then change it in our special theme which can be showcased Shiraz's ancient culture sounds dramatic. To task as soon as possible, we have to hire more staffs and experienced event managers should be met in session hence giving their opinions and adopting their recommendations. In the final stage, we could contract with a coordinator to operate everything consciously.
Due to lack of experience over holding such these awards, we can not
risk
our city's praise which means we are not able to present it in every format and if will
be wrecked
up it can
be spiced
Shiraz's resume up with the inability to manage.

We would cope with this obstacle by making an effort to consider the similar experience in other cities and their plans can
be replicated
in
some
parts. Implementing the other cities expertise then
change
it in our special theme which can
be showcased
Shiraz's ancient culture sounds dramatic.

To task as
soon
as possible, we
have to
hire more staffs and experienced
event
managers should
be met
in session
hence
giving their opinions and adopting their recommendations. In the final stage, we could contract with a coordinator to operate everything
consciously
.
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IELTS essay Proposal for hosting a Movie Awards Ceremony in Shiraz for the first time.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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