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Corona virus is effecting most of country in the world and it is really dangerous with human life

Corona virus is effecting most of country in the world and it is really dangerous with human life 0M519
Corona virus is effecting most of country in the world and it is really dangerous with human life. In my country it become more dangerous right now. Most of big city are impacted, even in my hometown: Danang city, Danang citizen have to stay at home for 4 months recently. specially from 16th of september till now we can not go out for work, do exercise or even to go to the market to buy food. Corona virus ‘s victim who are diseased in my city is about more than 100 person per day and we don’t known when the normal life will be come back
Corona virus
is effecting
most of country
in the world and it is
really
dangerous
with human life. In my country it
become
more
dangerous
right
now
. Most of
big
city
are impacted
, even in my hometown:
Danang
city,
Danang
citizen
have to
stay at home for 4 months recently.
specially
from 16th of
september
till
now
we can not go out for work, do exercise or even to go to the market to
buy
food.
Corona virus
‘s victim who
are diseased
in my city is about more than 100
person
per
day and
we don’t known when the normal life will be
come
back
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IELTS essay Corona virus is effecting most of country in the world and it is really dangerous with human life

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  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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