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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. e5k3W
Undoubtedly, recently, the topic of whether reading fiction is more enjoyable or watching movies has sparked a heated debate. In my opinion, both are totally different in nature and hence, the advantages of both are totally different from each other. Therefore, the comparison is impossible. On the one hand, firstly, when fiction books are considered, first of all, they are portable in nature, thus they can be taken anywhere one goes. That is to say that people in the first world countries and industrialized nations read different kinds of books such as novels or fictions to enjoy it when they are travelling by bus, taxi or metro. For a tangible example, scientists in 2008 in London and in a study proved that 66% of people who have used the public transport system for travelling have read different books on their travel. Secondly, people read the book to increase their knowledge and experience, which can decrease the consequences of unwanted events in people's lives and this event is extremely enjoyable for individuals. On the other hand, watching movies has many benefits too. First of all, watching movies or TV can affect behaviour and mood of people, thus it can be regarded as a remarkably valuable entertainment. In the second step, this kind of recreation extremely eliminates stress and tension, but it is not accessible anywhere. To summarize, some people are of the opinion that watching movies is more enjoyable than reading the novels, while others are opposed to this view. In my opinion, reading this kind of books are unbelievably more enjoyable than watching movies.
Undoubtedly
, recently, the topic of whether reading fiction is more
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enjoyable
or watching
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movies
has sparked a heated debate. In my opinion, both are
totally
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different
in nature and
hence
, the advantages of both are
totally
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different
from each other.
Therefore
, the comparison is impossible.

On the one hand,
firstly
, when fiction
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books
are considered
,
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first of all
, they are portable in nature,
thus
they can
be taken
anywhere one goes.
That is
to say that
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people
in the
first
world countries and industrialized nations read
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different
kinds of
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books
such as novels or fictions to enjoy it when they are travelling by bus, taxi or metro. For a tangible example, scientists in 2008 in London and in a study proved that 66% of
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people
who have
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used
the public transport system for travelling have read
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different
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books
on their travel.
Secondly
,
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people
read the
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book
to increase their knowledge and experience, which can decrease the consequences of unwanted
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events
in
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people
's
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lives
and this
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event
is
extremely
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enjoyable
for individuals.

On the other hand
, watching
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movies
has
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many
benefits too.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, watching
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movies
or TV can affect
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behaviour
and mood of
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people
,
thus
it can
be regarded
as a
remarkably
valuable entertainment. In the second step, this kind of recreation
extremely
eliminates
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stress
and tension,
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but
it is not accessible anywhere.

To summarize
,
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some
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people
are of the opinion that watching
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movies
is more
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enjoyable
than reading the novels, while others
are opposed
to this view. In my opinion, reading this kind of
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books
are
unbelievably
more
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enjoyable
than watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
.
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IELTS essay Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.5
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