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Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

owadays, there are a high range of movies or television offers. Some would arguee that watching an documentary on television is more an acitiv action than reading a book. However, there also books who would to be readed. Nevertheless, I believe that reading a book is more acitve than watching a movie. To begin with the use of the imigation for watching a movie can be active. Firstly, watching a movie or a soap can be calmy. After a stressful day it is nice to just watch a movie and forget everything from the day. Moreover, you can switch in a fiction world. Sedondly, to follow a documentary can be a good way to teach something new, but I think there is no space for imagination. So I think, that watching a movie is more a passive activity. Instead reading books can be an activ activity. In the one hand, you can be in an other world if you read an interessting book. In addition to this, you can explore and image an opposit life from yours and you can crate your own world. In the other hand, reading an book is more exhausting than follow a movie. In conlusion, people should spend times on reading books. However, if I had to choos between reading a book or watching a movie, I would go for reading a book. Because of the fact, that reading a book can be more acitivatet for your mind, while watching a movie is more passive.
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, there are a high range of
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movies
or television offers.
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would
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that
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watching


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an
documentary on television is more an
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acitiv
action than
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reading
a
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book
.
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, there
also
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books
who would to be
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readed
.
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, I believe that
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reading
a
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is more
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acitve
than watching a movie.

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with the
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imigation
for watching a
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movie
can be active.
Firstly
, watching a
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movie
or a soap can be
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calmy
. After a stressful day it is nice to
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just
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watch
a
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movie
and forget everything from the day.
Moreover
, you can switch in a fiction world.
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Sedondly
, to follow a documentary can be a
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good
way to teach something new,
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there is no space for imagination.
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I
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, that watching a
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is
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more a passive
activity.

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Instead
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reading
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books
can be an
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activ
activity. In the one hand, you can be in
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an other
world if you read an
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interessting
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book
.
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to this, you can explore and image an
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opposit
life from
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yours and
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world.
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the other hand,
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reading
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an
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is more exhausting than follow a movie.

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In
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conlusion
,
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reading
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books
.
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, if I had to
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between
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a
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book
or watching a
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movie
, I would go for
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a
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.
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of the fact, that
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a
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can be more
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acitivatet
for your mind, while watching a
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movie
is more passive.
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IELTS essay Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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