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Parenting has increasingly evolved in the recent years than before. In most countries, life has become so expensive which has made young people to avoid decision of having children before they settle into sustainable source of income. For this reason, It is therefore important to have children in later age as compared to many years back. Recently, the delayed decision to have children is more rampant even among couples. People have chosen to chase their dreams and have clearly designed path before they concisely conceive idea of bearing children. For example, in modern world education is adream for many that has taken alot of time. This has made many people to be chase it before any other choice like having children. Then finding a job or source of income is often a scarce as population continues to grow. Having children therefore, is a bout how one will be able to take care of there needs that allow them start giving birth. This has led to delayed age for those who wish to be parents. On the contrary, the past years were marked with relatively early parenting as compared to today. The same resources people are currently scrambling for were under utilized. Because of this, most poeple dint have to go to prolonged education systems to earn comfortable life. For example, land as a factor of production were mostly fertile and available in big chunks for small population were used to produce food which is a necessity in childs upbringing. This meant that there was no preoccupation to delay childbirth. Teenagers got married and started families without second thought of future. In conclusion, child bearing timing is an important aspect of life currently. Resources are nearly geting depleted recently compared to earlier centuries. men and women need to delay until they are able to provide for the coming generation before they give birth. Livelihood is only managed mostly by the educated important go to school and delay childbirth in the current world.
Parenting has
increasingly
evolved in the recent years than
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before
. In most countries, life has become
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so
expensive which has made young
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people
to avoid decision of having
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children
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before
they settle into sustainable source of income.
For this reason
, It is
therefore
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important
to have
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children
in later age as compared to
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many
years back.

Recently, the delayed decision to have
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children
is more rampant even among couples.
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People
have chosen to chase their dreams and have
clearly
designed path
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before
they
concisely
conceive
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idea
of bearing
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children
.
For example
, in modern world education is
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adream
for
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many
that has taken
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alot
of time. This has made
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many
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people
to be
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chase
it
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before
any other choice like having
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children
. Then finding a job or source of income is
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often
a scarce as population continues to grow. Having
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children
therefore
, is a bout how one will be able to take care of
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there
needs that
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allow
them
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start
giving birth. This has led to delayed age for those who wish to be parents.

On the contrary
, the past years
were marked
with
relatively
early parenting as compared to
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today
. The same resources
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people
are
currently
scrambling for were under utilized.
Because of this
, most
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poeple
dint
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have to
go to prolonged education systems to earn comfortable life.
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, land as a factor of production were
mostly
fertile and available in
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big
chunks for
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small
population were
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used
to produce food which is a necessity in
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upbringing. This meant that there was no preoccupation to delay childbirth.
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Teenagers
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got
married and
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started
families without second
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thought
of future.

In conclusion
, child bearing timing is an
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important
aspect of life
currently
. Resources are
nearly
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geting
depleted recently compared to earlier centuries.
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men
and women need to delay until they are able to provide for the coming generation
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before
they give birth. Livelihood is
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only
managed
mostly
by the educated
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important
go to school and delay childbirth in the
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current
world.
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IELTS essay rampant even among couple

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4 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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