Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Question: 40 minutes task Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practise should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

Laws are made to protect our general safety, and ensure our rights as citizens against abuses by other people, by organization, and by the government. Under British and Australian Laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant’s past criminal record. This protects the crime accused person. Some lawyers suggested it to be changed and after discussing all the facts before reached at the decision. Personally, I am in favour of latter view. That kind of rules to promote the criminal they punished only for the crime they did recently. Some criminal had a big record of crimes, it is very dangerous for the public because the criminal is roaming freely among the public. It helps the criminal to take further step toward the crime. Small crimes take form of a big incident. As a result people should pay back by lost their lives in an attack or in big accidents. I completely agree on this statement that this practise should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. It helps to stop promoting the criminals for doing some criminal activities. It creats the safety among the public and to issue a warning for the criminals and force to think before doing a criminal activity. Overall, laws are made for the public and it helps to protect them agaist abuses by other people or an organization.
Laws
are made
to protect our general safety, and ensure our rights as citizens against abuses by other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, by organization, and by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
. Under British and Australian Laws a jury in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
case has no access to information about the defendant’s past
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
record. This protects the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
accused person.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
lawyers suggested it to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
and after discussing all the facts
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
reached at the decision.
Personally
, I am in
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favour’ is British English.
favour
of latter view.

That kind of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
to promote the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
they punished
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
they did recently.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
record of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
is roaming
freely
among the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
to take
further
step toward the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
take form of a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
incident.
As a result
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
should pay back by lost their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in an attack or in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
accidents.

I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
on this statement that this
Possible spelling mistake. ‘practise’ is British English.
practise
should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
and that a jury should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
all the past facts
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
they reach their decision about the case. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
promoting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
for doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
activities. It
Possible spelling mistake found.
creats
the safety among the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
and to issue a warning for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
and force to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
doing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminal
activity.

Overall
, laws
are made
for the
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
public and
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to protect them
Possible spelling mistake found.
agaist
abuses by other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
or an organization.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Question: 40 minutes task Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practise should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts