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Public transport advantages and diadvantages

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It's for many years that public transport is used in many cities and towns in almost all over the world. In large cities especially we can see the advanced means of transport. However there are both pros and cons for this and I'll discuss about advantages or disadvantages. On the upside it's environmentally friendly. Using this system can reduce the level of air pollution and toxis gases. The other major benefits is, it's extremely cheap in comparison with using personal car. Imagine that it was mandatory to use private transport all the time could you imagine how much money you would have to spend for your car's patrol. On the downside long waiting times is a big disadvantage. passengers spent many hours on the stations and inside the busses. Particularly when it comes to using buses the problem becomes more annoying. The other significant cons of public transport is it less flexibility. Buses carries a lot of people during a day and they're crowded this probably makes people impatienc. Using public transport has made people's life easier, but as many issues it's got its own benefits and drawbacks that people should consider all of them. Personally I believe that everything that makes people's life better and easier must be noticed.
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years that public
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cities and towns in almost all over the world. In large cities
especially
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see
the advanced means of
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discuss about advantages
or disadvantages. On the upside
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environmentally
friendly. Using this system can
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reduce
the level of air pollution and
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gases. The other major benefits is,
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extremely
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cheap
in comparison
with using personal car. Imagine that it was mandatory to
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use
private
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transport
all the time could you imagine how much money you would
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disadvantage.
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passengers
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hours on the stations and inside the busses.
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to using buses the problem becomes more annoying. The other significant cons of public
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is it less flexibility.
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's life easier,
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benefits and drawbacks that
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should consider all of them.
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IELTS essay Public transport advantages and diadvantages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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