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Pterosaurs were not able to fly, is the topic of both the reading and the writing.

Pterosaurs were not able to fly, is the topic of both the reading and the writing. MMLGe
Pterosaurs were not able to fly, is the topic of both the reading and the writing. The author claims that pterosaurs didn't have the ability to powered flight and provided three theory to prove it. The lecturer, however, casts doubt on the reading and states that pterosaurs were capable of powered flight, and refutes all arguments made in the reading. First of all, the reading claims that as pterosaurs were cold blood animal and had a slow metabolism, they were not capable of making enough power which was needed to powered flight. The reading, on the other hand, refutes this point. He says that from fossilized pterosaurs indicates that they had a dense cover on their body, and which is very common on warm blood animals. As they had warm blood, they generated sufficient power which enabled them to fly. Secondly, the author avers that since pterosaurs had a heavy body, they were not able to flap their wings for making a flight. However, in the audio, the professor states that even though they had a big body, their boons were very light. He also mentions that as wings weight were very small relative to their body, they indeed would have been able to flap their wings. Finally, the reading states that they had landing problems because of their big body. The professor opposes this point. He says that pterosaurs, unlike birds, had four limbs and could be able to land using this four legs without having any problems. He also repeats that during their landing time, they could balance their body by using those four limbs.
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Pterosaurs
were not
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able
to
fly
, is the topic of both the
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reading
and the writing. The author claims that
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pterosaurs
didn't have the ability to powered
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flight
and provided three theory to prove it. The lecturer,
however
, casts doubt on the
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reading
and states that
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pterosaurs
were capable of powered
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flight
, and refutes all arguments made in the reading.

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First of all
, the
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reading
claims that as
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pterosaurs
were
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cold
blood animal and had a slow metabolism, they were not capable of making
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enough
power which
was needed
to powered
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flight
. The
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reading
,
on the other hand
, refutes this point. He says that from fossilized
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pterosaurs
indicates that they had a dense cover on their
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body
, and which is
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very
common on warm blood animals. As they had warm blood, they generated sufficient power which enabled them to
fly
.

Secondly
, the author avers that since
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pterosaurs
had a heavy
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body
, they were not
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able
to flap their wings for making a
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flight
.
However
, in the audio, the professor states that
even though
they had a
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big
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body
, their boons were
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very
light. He
also
mentions that as wings weight were
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very
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small
relative to their
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body
, they
indeed
would have been
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able
to flap their wings.

Finally
, the
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reading
states that they had landing problems
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because
of their
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big
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body
. The professor opposes this point. He says that
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pterosaurs
, unlike birds, had four limbs and could be
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able
to land using this four legs without having any problems. He
also
repeats that during their landing time, they could balance their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
body
by using those four limbs.
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IELTS essay Pterosaurs were not able to fly, is the topic of both the reading and the writing.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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