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Provide an overall description of British education.

Provide an overall description of British education. 0ay73
The basic features of the British educational system are the same as they are anywhere else in Europe and North America: full-time education is compulsory up to the middle teenage years; the academic year begins at the end of summer; compulsory education is free of charge. The education system in the UK is divided into four main parts: primary education, secondary education, further education and higher education. Children in the UK have to legally attend primary and secondary education, which runs from about 5 years old until the student is 16 years old. And at the age of 16, people are free to leave school if they want to.
The basic features of the British educational system are the same as they are anywhere else in Europe and North America: full-time
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is compulsory up to the middle teenage years; the academic
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year
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begins
at the
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of summer; compulsory
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is free of charge.

The
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system in the UK
is divided
into four main parts: primary
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, secondary
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,
further
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education
and higher
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. Children in the UK
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legally
attend primary and secondary
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, which runs from about 5 years
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until the student is 16 years
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. And at the age of 16,
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IELTS essay Provide an overall description of British education.

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109 words
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