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Technologies make our life easier and at the same time put our personal data at risk. The development of the electronics and computer paved the way to the appearance of a new type of crime such as identity theft. Is there any way to feel safe online and protect ourselves? First of all, there are a number of reasons to use credit card in order to protect identity online. Since thieves mostly attack senior or young people as they might be quite naive, they should be educated on how to purchase online. It is safer to make online payments using a credit card instead of a debit card as much as if our financial information is stolen, credit card companies typically offer greater protection. If it is possible use a dedicated card for online buying and be on a guard of spending history. Another factor to consider is deleting suspicious emails. When it comes to mail, we often do not look at the subject of letters as in the modern hectic world a quantity of things must be done and thousands of emails must be replied to. According to experts on online frauds, sending emails to gather personal information, for instance, passwords, is a common practice. Therefore, be aware of unsolicited emails and never click on suspicious links. Installing time-tested security software may prevent possible frauds. Taking everything into consideration, there is a possibility to protect our identities online. I suppose that being aware of doubtful emails is the most effective point. It all begins with following unwanted links and facing personal data being stolen because of self carelessness, therefore each user should be on his own guard.
Technologies
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make
our life easier and at the same time put our personal data at
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risk
. The development of the electronics and computer paved the way to the appearance of a new type of crime such as identity theft. Is there any way to feel safe
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online
and protect ourselves?

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First of all
, there are a number of reasons to
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use
credit
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card
in order to protect identity
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online
. Since thieves
mostly
attack senior or young
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people
as they might be quite naive, they should
be educated
on how to
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purchase
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online
. It is safer to
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make
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online
payments using a credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
instead
of a debit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
as much as if our financial information
is stolen
, credit
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card
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companies
typically
offer greater protection. If it is possible
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use
a dedicated
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card
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
buying and be on a guard of spending history.

Another factor to consider is deleting suspicious emails. When it
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comes
to mail, we
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often
do not look at the subject of letters as in the modern hectic world a quantity of things
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must
be done
and thousands of emails
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must
be replied
to. According to experts on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
frauds, sending emails to gather personal information,
for instance
, passwords, is a common practice.
Therefore
, be aware of unsolicited emails and never click on suspicious links. Installing time-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
security software may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
possible frauds.

Taking everything into consideration, there is a possibility to protect our identities
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
. I suppose that being aware of doubtful emails is the most effective point. It all
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begins
with following unwanted links and facing personal data
being stolen
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because
of self carelessness,
therefore
each user should be on his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
guard.
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IELTS essay protecting against identity theft

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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