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Pros and cons of computer.

Pros and cons of computer. gWBd7
Nowadays, computer plays an important role in the world which make our life more convenient and easier. Besides, computers also have some disadvantages. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of computers. We can’t deny that computer makes our tasks becomes more convenient and faster, computers can perform a long calculation in just a few second that help people save a lot of time, cost and effort. For instance, in the past when students want to solve a hard calculation they need to spend so many time and try a lot of methods, but now they just do some steps with the computer and then they can receive the result easily. The computer is a good tool that helps students a lot in their studies. However, computers also have cons that we should mention. Firstly, a number of children are now addicting to computer games, they spend all of their time to play games and they don’t want to go out to do some physical exercises which will harm to their health seriously. Secondly, computer can make people lose their life skills and analytical skills, if they depend too much on computer to solve problems in their life. For example, whenever students face with a difficult task they always use the helps of computer to solve the question which makes their skills worse and worse. In conclusion, the computer is a useful tool that help us a lot in our life, but it still have some issues we should avoid.
Nowadays, computer plays an
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role in the world which
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more convenient and easier.
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disadvantages. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of computers.

We can’t deny that computer
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makes
our tasks becomes more convenient and faster, computers can perform a long calculation in
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a few second that
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help
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save a
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of time, cost and effort.
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calculation they need to spend
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and try a
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of methods,
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easily
. The computer is a
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tool that
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students a
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Firstly
, a number of children are
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addicting to computer games, they spend all of their time to play
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physical exercises which will harm to their health
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Secondly
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and analytical
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, if they depend too much on computer to solve problems in their
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life
.
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, whenever students face with a difficult task they always
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of computer to solve
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worse and worse.

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in our
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,
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issues we should avoid.
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IELTS essay Pros and cons of computer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
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