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Proposal for new employee of the year

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To whom it may concern, Aim of this proposal is to recommend that my friend james is one of the best option to be chosen. It has been six months since I met james. He is hardworking, energetic, trustworthy, unselfish and friendly. He spends his time on helping co-workers. I have witnessed a lot of time that he has endeavoured to improve his skill to contribute this company in addition He took many different courses so far such as dancing, spanish. His role is a software engineer in the company. He started to work just 5 months ago and became our one of the best colleague. I believe that His abilities will be so critical for this project since, there is no doubt he will extent our horizons. When I compare other stuff to james he has right to win this reward because His character is very suitable to help the company to build a marvellous future also this award will encourage the others employees to be more beneficial for the company. Best,
To whom it may concern,

Aim of this proposal is to recommend that my friend
james
is one of the best option to
be chosen
. It has been six months since I met
james
. He is hardworking, energetic, trustworthy, unselfish and friendly. He spends his time on helping co-workers. I have witnessed
a lot of
time that he has
endeavoured
to
improve
his
skill
to contribute this
company
in addition
He took
many
different
courses
so
far such as dancing,
spanish
.

His role is a software engineer in the
company
. He
started
to work
just
5 months ago and became our one of the best colleague. I believe that His abilities will be
so
critical for this project since, there is no doubt he
will extent
our horizons.

When I compare other stuff to
james
he has right to win this reward
because
His character is
very
suitable to
help
the
company
to build a
marvellous
future
also
this award will encourage the others employees to be more beneficial for the
company
.

Best,
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IELTS essay Proposal for new employee of the year

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  American English
5 paragraphs
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