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Product purchase influence

Product purchase influence jogY8
It is often argued that people end up buying items that they do not really need due to advertisements while few others say it is the best way to broaden their horizons to learn about different products. This essay will discuss both the ideas. In general, people tend to fall prey to advertisements and end up buying products that aren't actually needed to meet their daily needs. For example, I bought a toast maker by seeing an ad. But I rarely use it because I am not a huge fan of English breakfast. Due to the star value and the brand value that was advertised, I felt tempted and bought it. At the same time, ads are a great platform to know many useful products that are there in the market to reduce manual efforts. I am a great fan of healthy diet and prefer to have fresh juice daily. I happened to find a new on-the-go blender through a commercial and I purchased it right away. It has outstanding options to ease my job in making healthy juice. The conclusion here is advertisements are a great medium to sell new articles to people. But I feel it is the duty of every individul to decide and make a concious decision if they really need the product or not. Thanks
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argued that
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people
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end
up buying items that they do not
really
need due to advertisements while few others say it is the best way to broaden their horizons to learn about
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different
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products
. This essay will discuss both the
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ideas
.

In general
,
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people
tend to fall prey to advertisements and
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end
up buying
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products
that aren't actually needed to
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meet
their daily needs.
For example
, I
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bought
a toast maker by seeing an ad.
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But
I rarely
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use
it
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because
I am not a huge fan of English breakfast. Due to the star value and the brand value that
was advertised
, I felt tempted and
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bought
it.

At the same time, ads are a great platform to know
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many
useful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
that are there in the market to
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reduce
manual efforts. I am a great fan of healthy diet and prefer to have fresh juice daily. I happened to find a new on-the-go blender through a commercial and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
it right away. It has outstanding options to
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ease
my job in making healthy juice.

The conclusion here is advertisements are a great medium to sell new articles to
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people
.
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But
I feel it is the duty of every
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individul
to decide and
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make
a
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concious
decision if they
really
need the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
or not.

Thanks

IELTS essay Product purchase influence

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
219 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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