Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations? GK8j
through different part of media, we come across reports that some civilisation convey the massage is many students live with their families but in other hand some pupils live far away form the house because their higher education places in other place. there is no wonder that a growing awareness prevails about it. this trend brings both, merits and demerits. There are couple of promising influences of students live with families and away from families both are the beneficial, while the pursuing their education at the university. The most rewarding factor is that they can live with the economic accommodation. This view exists as when they are with their families the can not pay any amount on food, house rent, and essential things. As a result, they can enjoy with their families and away from the pay monthly expenses. In addition it is also seen that they can make bond with the new students. This idea is buoyed in the fact that when students live in another place they can meet other countries students and it is easier to interact with fellow students. Therefore, they make friendship and also establish study routines, These factors may help them in their studies. an international survey in this matter has revealed that nowadays 60 percentage student prefer to live far away from the families. However drawbacks cannot be ignore. One of the abhorable impact is that when student live into the other place they can face many problem. My observation is valid due to the evidence that having to find accommodation because mostly universities are located in the urban centres, where rents are high if students have to find a room but it not have any basic facilities. Hence, their living cost is expensive so they cannot manage life and they fell stress. Not only these we can also consider that when student live with their families their home situation also is a disadvantage. My opinion is owing to my explanation that family routines are often disruptive for students who have to concentrate on their studies in a quiet atmosphere. The outcome is that it is hard to keep up with a study schedule in the evenings or weekends days. The fact that living in both place many factors are disturb their study. to sum up, in the foreseeable future, mostly student will choose to live in other place for their higher studies and it would be fortunate for the future generation.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
through
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
part of media, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
across reports that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Did you mean "civilisations"?
civilisation
convey the massage is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
pupils
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
far
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
away
form the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
their higher education
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
there
is no wonder that a growing awareness prevails about it. this trend brings both, merits and demerits. There are
It seems that an article is missing.
couple of
promising influences of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
away
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
both are the beneficial, while the pursuing their education at the university. The most rewarding factor is that they can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
with the economic accommodation. This view exists as when they are with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
Did you mean "they", "that" or "there"?
the
can not pay any amount on food,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
rent, and essential things.
As a result
, they can enjoy with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
away
from the pay monthly expenses. In
The comma is probably missing here: "addition, it".
addition it
is
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
bond with the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
is buoyed
in the fact that when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
countries
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and it is easier to interact with fellow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
Therefore
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
friendship and
also
establish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
routines, These factors may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
an
international survey in this matter has revealed that nowadays 60 percentage
Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: "students".
student
prefer to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
far
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
away
from the families.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
drawbacks cannot be
Consider using the past participle "ignored"?
ignore
. One of the
Possible spelling mistake found.
abhorable
impact is that when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
they can face
Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: "many problems".
many problem
. My observation is valid due to the evidence that having to find accommodation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
mostly
universities
are located
in the urban
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
, where rents are high if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
find a room
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it not
Did you mean "has"?
have
any basic facilities.
Hence
, their living cost is expensive
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they cannot manage
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
life and
they fell
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
these we can
also
consider that when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
their home situation
also
is a disadvantage. My opinion is owing to my explanation that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
routines are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
disruptive for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
concentrate on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
in a quiet atmosphere. The outcome is that it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
schedule in the evenings or weekends days. The fact that living in both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors are
Consider using a past participle here: "disturbed".
disturb
their study.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
to
sum up, in the foreseeable future,
mostly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
will choose to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
for their higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
and it would be fortunate for the future generation.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
409 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?