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"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly, so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

Preventive measures are more beneficial than treating and curing disease. To invest valuable time and money in preventive measures would be a better alternative. I believe investments should be made on both sides. Investment in research for treating diseases should continue because illness could happen anytime to anyone, organizations must have all the necessary technology and equipment to cure the disease. Discontinuing the research work in the treatment would be a disaster if any new kind of diseases appear. Research institute should have a backup plan to tackle the situation. Moreover, without knowledge of diseases, one could not prevent it in advance. The focus of research should be more on how to make treatments affordable for developing countries. Prevention is always better than cure, and investment should be made in the research of that. Healthy living is the mantra for a disease-free life, and it comes from eating the right food. It is the reason for both good health and bad health. New findings in food nutrition are more important. People should follow a diet to stay healthy. People should reduce eating fast food. Along with eating good food, physical training is also a big part of daily life. Researchers should conduct experiments for the prevention of diseases by doing exercise. The regime should spend its money on reducing pollution from the country because living in a bad environment has detrimental effects on health. It is also one kind of preventive measure In conclusion, no doubt prevention is better than cure, and investing in it is the better choice. However, treatment of diseases and making it affordable is important too.
Preventive measures are more beneficial than treating and curing
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disease
. To invest valuable time and money in preventive measures would be a
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better
alternative. I believe investments should
be made
on both sides.

Investment in
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research
for treating
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diseases
should continue
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because
illness could happen anytime to anyone, organizations
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must
have all the necessary technology and equipment to cure the
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disease
. Discontinuing the
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research
work in the treatment would be a disaster if any new kind of
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diseases
appear.
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Research
institute should have a backup plan to tackle the situation.
Moreover
, without knowledge of
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diseases
, one could not
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prevent
it in advance. The focus of
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research
should be more on how to
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make
treatments affordable for
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developing countries
.

Prevention is always
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better
than cure, and investment should
be made
in the
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research
of that. Healthy living is the mantra for a disease-free life, and it
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comes
from eating the right
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food
. It is the reason for both
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good
health and
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bad
health. New findings in
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food
nutrition are more
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important
.
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People
should follow a diet to stay healthy.
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People
should
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reduce
eating
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fast
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food
. Along with eating
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good
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food
, physical training is
also
a
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big
part of daily life. Researchers should conduct experiments for the prevention of
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diseases
by doing exercise. The regime should spend its money on reducing pollution from the country
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because
living in a
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bad
environment has detrimental effects on health. It is
also
one kind of preventive
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measure


In conclusion
, no doubt prevention is
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better
than cure, and investing in it is the
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better
choice.
However
, treatment of
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diseases
and making it affordable is
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important
too.
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IELTS essay "Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly, so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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