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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Being around with a good company is always heartwarming. But is it better having a kind family than having friendship? In my view, families benefits you to be well-adjusted depending on the fact that if the family has got good parenting or not. On the other hand a good group of friends is great too. Having a great family is more comfortable than having friends. In the following paragraphs i will monitor my thoughts about this statement.
Being around with a
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good
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is always heartwarming.
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is it better
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having
a kind
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family
than
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having
friendship? In my view,
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families
benefits you to be well-adjusted depending on the fact that if the
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family
has
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got
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parenting or not.
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a
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good
group of friends is great too.
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Having
a great
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family
is more comfortable than
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having
friends. In the following paragraphs
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IELTS essay It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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