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"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly, so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

The Indian regime has announced a lockdown on Sunday To diminish the effect of the new coronavirus. They have formed a nexus of policemen and deployed on the street to confine the civilian movement. If any individual or organization doesn’t cognizant of the orders, the police will probe into the matter. People mull about the situation. Commercial activities have stopped. WHO has given guidelines. The situation of the upcoming months in the country is on the knife edge. Migrant workers have abandoned cities as they got cognizant. Many organizations aid workers to reach their homes. Government is ambiguous about what further steps to take because no one has anticipated the outbreak. The number of cases is attaining to fifty thousand per day. Some people have not changed their attitude towards the disease and neglecting the consequences. The attribute of a virus is that they spread by touch. Research work has commenced in the meantime. Google has started comprehensive details of the deadly virus on the internet. People have started working from home. No one has ever conceived of working from home. Families have convened in one place. Despite the outbreak, people are enjoying being at home. They are cooking new dishes, Developing an interest in other activities, and exhibiting their talents. They are exploiting this time very effectively. While being at home all day, the government emphasizes taking care of mental health. As months passed, the situation is improving. The government is gradually unlocking the country. We hope the situation will have controlled by next year.
The Indian regime has announced a lockdown on Sunday To diminish the effect of the new coronavirus. They have formed a nexus of policemen and deployed on the street to confine the civilian movement. If any individual or organization doesn’t cognizant of the orders, the police will probe into the matter.
People
mull about the situation.

Commercial activities have
stopped
. WHO has
given
guidelines. The situation of the upcoming months in the country is on the knife edge. Migrant workers have abandoned cities as they
got
cognizant.
Many
organizations aid workers to reach their
homes
.
Government
is ambiguous about what
further
steps to take
because
no one has anticipated the outbreak. The number of cases is attaining to fifty thousand per day.
Some
people
have not
changed
their attitude towards the disease and neglecting the consequences. The attribute of a virus is that they spread by touch.

Research work has commenced in the meantime. Google has
started
comprehensive
details
of the deadly virus on the internet.
People
have
started
working from home. No one has ever conceived of working from home. Families have convened in one place. Despite the outbreak,
people
are enjoying being at home. They are cooking new dishes, Developing an interest in other activities, and exhibiting their talents. They are exploiting this time
very
effectively
. While being at home all day, the
government
emphasizes taking care of mental health.

As months passed, the situation is improving. The
government
is
gradually
unlocking the country. We hope the situation will have controlled by
next
year.
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IELTS essay "Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly, so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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