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prevention is better than cure.Do you agree or disagree?

In this world, preventative actions are stated as a much more useful than treating people. I believe preventative measures should be expended in terms of preserving people's lives. To begin with, Diseases are increasing in this wolrd, I think avoidness has more benefits. First of all, prevention is less time consuming than cure for a disease. Those who become ill have to be treated to heal for a long time. By preventative measures people can save time as well as money. Because Treat for a sicknesses requires an enormous amount of money. Another advantage belonging to prevention is that establishing a healthy lifestyle. People who prefer avoidness try to maintain a healthy lifestyle. By preventing diseases people can rescue from a risk of death. Because no one can not guarantee that treatment of patient will be successful. In conclusion, diseases should be avoided for the certain reasons mentioned rather than treat.

In this world, preventative actions are stated
 as a much more useful than treating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. I believe preventative measures should be expended
 in terms of preserving This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaladystrokeillnesssyndromeCancersickness
Diseases
 are increasing in this Possible spelling mistake found.wordworldwoldWord
wolrd
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
Possible spelling mistake found.validnessacridnessvapidness
avoidness
 has more benefits. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, prevention is less This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.time-consuming
time consuming
 than cure for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaladystrokeillnesssyndromeCancersickness
disease
. Those who become ill This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be treated
 to heal for a long time. By preventative measures You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can save time as well
 as money. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 Treat for The plural noun “sicknesses” cannot be used with the article “a”. Did you mean “a sickness” or “sicknesses”?a sicknesssicknesses
a sicknesses
 requires an enormous amount of money. Another advantage belonging to prevention is that establishing a healthy lifestyle. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 who prefer Possible spelling mistake found.validnessacridnessvapidness
avoidness
 try to maintain a healthy lifestyle. By preventing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaladystrokeillnesssyndromeCancersickness
diseases
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can rescue from a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 of death. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 no one can not guarantee that treatment of patient will be successful. In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaladystrokeillnesssyndromeCancersickness
diseases
 should be avoided
 for the certain reasons mentioned rather
 than treat. 