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prevention is better than cure.Do you agree or disagree?

In this world, preventative actions are stated as a much more useful than treating people. I believe preventative measures should be expended in terms of preserving people's lives. To begin with, Diseases are increasing in this wolrd, I think avoidness has more benefits. First of all, prevention is less time consuming than cure for a disease. Those who become ill have to be treated to heal for a long time. By preventative measures people can save time as well as money. Because Treat for a sicknesses requires an enormous amount of money. Another advantage belonging to prevention is that establishing a healthy lifestyle. People who prefer avoidness try to maintain a healthy lifestyle. By preventing diseases people can rescue from a risk of death. Because no one can not guarantee that treatment of patient will be successful. In conclusion, diseases should be avoided for the certain reasons mentioned rather than treat.
In this world, preventative actions
are stated
as a much more useful than treating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. I believe preventative measures should
be expended
in terms of preserving
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people
's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. To
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begin
with,
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Diseases
are increasing in this
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wolrd
, I
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think
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avoidness
has more benefits.
Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
, prevention is less
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time consuming
than cure for a
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disease
. Those who become ill
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have to
be treated
to heal for a long time. By preventative measures
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can save time
as well
as money.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
Treat for
The plural noun “sicknesses” cannot be used with the article “a”. Did you mean “a sickness” or “sicknesses”?
a sicknesses
requires an enormous amount of money. Another advantage belonging to prevention is that establishing a healthy lifestyle.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
who prefer
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avoidness
try to maintain a healthy lifestyle. By preventing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can rescue from a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of death.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
no one can not guarantee that treatment of patient will be successful.
In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
should
be avoided
for the certain reasons mentioned
rather
than treat.

IELTS essay prevention is better than cure.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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4.0
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