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“prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what you extend do you agree.

Nowadays huge amount of scientists are into thoughts that prophylactic is more better than healing. Diagnostic and cure of variety illnesses needs much bigger wastes than prevention of measures. I honestly believe that various kinds of new measures would greater impact in our medical science than current diseases treating. Firstly, I strongly believe that not every treating would help specific people. All way of healing one particular illness in the end could become like a waste of time and person, who had this disease will pass away. I truly can not imagine huge numbers of donations that were spent on such non helpful treatment. Moreover, doctors never could be sure that their purposes of treatment will have success in future. On the contrary, donation to future dominant healing system, which is preventative measures in all ways is the finest choice. Firstly, only one discovered measure could help in treating thousands of people in different world angles. Although, I am really into thoughts that this experience would cost less than healing one disease. Secondly, I suppose that dying out of human population will dramatically rise down. Generally, successful future of prophylactic was predicted by scientists and UN few years ago. Also arguments to this decision is presented in this essay. To sum it up, I would say that on our future prevention of measures would have a huge impact, to be precise, awesome impact. Dying out will fell down and for many years worldwide budget will increase at least for 20%.
Nowadays huge amount of scientists are into thoughts that prophylactic is more better than healing. Diagnostic and cure of variety illnesses needs much bigger wastes than prevention of
measures
. I
honestly
believe that various kinds of new
measures
would greater impact in our medical science than
current
diseases treating.

Firstly
, I
strongly
believe that not every treating would
help
specific
people
. All way of healing one particular illness in the
end
could become like a waste of time and person, who had this disease will pass away. I
truly
can not imagine huge numbers of donations that
were spent
on such non helpful treatment.
Moreover
, doctors never could be sure that their purposes of treatment will have success in future.

On the contrary
, donation to future dominant healing system, which is preventative
measures
in all ways is the finest choice.
Firstly
,
only
one discovered
measure
could
help
in treating thousands of
people
in
different
world angles. Although, I am
really
into thoughts that this experience would cost less than healing one disease.
Secondly
, I suppose that dying out of human population will
dramatically
rise down.

Generally
, successful future of prophylactic
was predicted
by scientists and UN few years ago.
Also
arguments to this decision
is presented
in this essay.

To sum it up, I would say that on our future prevention of
measures
would have a huge impact, to be precise, awesome impact. Dying out will fell down and for
many
years worldwide budget will increase at least for 20%.
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IELTS essay “prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what you extend do you agree.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
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