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President: Steel Industry is an Important Pillar of Economic Growth

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This statement was made by the President when giving a speech at the Inauguration of Hot Strip Mill #2 PT Krakatau Steel (Persero) TBK in Cilegon City, Banten Province, Tuesday 21 September 2021. Previously, the President reviewed the factory to be inaugurated. The factory, said the President, uses modern and latest technology in the steel industry. “And there are only two in the world. The first in the United States and the second in Indonesia at Krakatau Steel, " said the President. The factory has a Hot Rolled Coil (HRC) production capacity of 1. 5 million tons per year and is the first factory in Indonesia capable of producing premium quality HRC. On the occasion, the President also reminded that the domestic demand for steel also continues to increase from year to year. "Do not allow foreign products to enter, " said the President.
This statement
was made
by the President when giving a speech at the Inauguration of Hot Strip Mill #2 PT
Krakatau
Steel
(
Persero
) TBK in
Cilegon
City,
Banten
Province, Tuesday 21 September 2021.

Previously, the President reviewed the
factory
to
be inaugurated
. The
factory
, said the President,
uses
modern and latest technology in the
steel
industry.

“And there are
only
two in the world. The
first
in the United States and the second in Indonesia at
Krakatau
Steel
,
"
said the President.

The
factory
has a Hot Rolled Coil (HRC) production capacity of 1. 5 million tons per year and is the
first
factory
in Indonesia capable of producing premium quality HRC.

On the occasion, the President
also
reminded that the domestic demand for
steel
also
continues to increase from year to year.
"
Do not
allow
foreign products to enter,
"
said the President.
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IELTS essay President: Steel Industry is an Important Pillar of Economic Growth

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