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11 Money
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People
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is
the mast
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because
this ion after
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important
for every century wealth.
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folks.
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says
that
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iffrean
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hut
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lubundantly
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.
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others
donate to!
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science
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believe
that and education
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very
successful. In this essay we will discuss both aspects that give
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cush
to Society believe
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use
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vieful
.

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people
have lots Money
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because
nowadays
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people
are
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succesful
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think
that wealth is
first
thing for all
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mozeover
,
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buse
of all thing high
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cush
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uny
Person
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hus
if individuals
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.
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to
required more not
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any one
since
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So
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hurd
currency
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live
.
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buy
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own
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house
without afford to Personal home.
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Petrol
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und
diesel
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butes
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use
high transport afford humans
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because
middle Person
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belive
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thut
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use
Victorious.
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to
public
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class
not vehicle.
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all
in all more coins person
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that


give up to

The second
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think
education and
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use
crucial
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of
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, donate to
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cae
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promete
increase education is to the community research
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thut
more
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technol
of these of my search economy. Despite
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muin
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section


that

researchers

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Imation
. Due to on Study these if we our teaching.
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aute
increase.

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jund
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thun
education

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that
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good
for civilization.
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However
However
, schooling for our Country
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bayis
of
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muin
in
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come
that run the teaching.

In my point of view, more coins Crucial
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but
if Arrive the community beneficial for the nation and
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technologicaly
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Chunge
the mind set
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broud
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uspects
.
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und
Schooling of
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people
,
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think


In conclusion
, wealth.
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is
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importunt
for human,
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but
if these.
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civilization
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isse
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for


increase

411
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people
growth

and these

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country
and folk.

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zute


most benefit to
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IELTS essay & some people suy bonuke succesfuld. lot contributes. to that individuells who of money saciety Heachers. are mosc both views that those who like scientis and successful piscuss the your openion.

Essay
  American English
17 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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