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presentation in schools is good or bad?

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In many nations people have put a premium on teaching how to give a presentation in schools. Nowadays, one of the most challenging hot subjects which has recurrently been under the media spotlight is the specific roots that cause this concern. There are predictably numerous arguments for and against this issue, in this regard, the present essay will briefly explain reasons and plus points. As it was mentioned above, the nation’s fondness about teaching giving speeches at schools have some reasons which should be taken into consideration. To begin with, many individuals argue that if they had learned rules of a professional presentation, they would find a better job with a steady income. They, therefore, highly recommend that this skill should be taught at schools. Secondly, this skill can be used for not only seeking a demanding job but also selling products. The more people have ability to give a presentation, the more products will be sold, and the more annual turnover they will have in their business. On the other hand, many individuals believe that plus sides of learning giving presentations at school are by no means negligible. Firstly, it is necessary for a university student to be able to give lecture about research he or she carried out; as a result, if people do not learn this skill at schools, they should spend vast sums of time on it at university. In addition, according to statistics presented by some organizations, some parents who are not qualified and talented teach this skill to their infants in a wrong way. Authorities should prevent this issue by teaching correct ways of presentation at schools. To put in a nutshell, teaching giving speeches at schools is both rewarding and problematic, although having considered the logical points presented above, it could be safely concluded that its positive points like saving time at university or learning this skill in a correct way outweigh its negative points. Increasing efficiency of selling products and finding better occupations are some reasons of this interest.
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have put a premium on
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teaching
how to give a
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presentation
in
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schools
. Nowadays, one of the most challenging hot subjects which has
recurrently
been under the media spotlight is the specific roots that cause this concern. There are
predictably
numerous arguments for and against this issue, in this regard, the present essay will
briefly
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explain
reasons and plus points.

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above, the nation’s fondness about
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teaching
giving speeches at
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schools
have
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reasons which should
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many
individuals argue that if they had learned
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rules
of a professional
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presentation
, they would find a better job with a steady income. They,
therefore
,
highly
recommend that this
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should
be taught
at
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schools
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seeking a demanding job
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also
selling products. The more
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people
have ability to give a
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, the more products will
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individuals believe that plus sides of learning
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are by no means negligible.
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, it is necessary for a university student to be able to give lecture about research he or she carried out;
as a result
, if
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people
do not learn this
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at
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, they should spend vast sums of time on it at university.
In addition
, according to statistics presented by
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organizations,
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parents who are not qualified and talented teach this
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to their infants in a
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wrong
way. Authorities should
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prevent
this issue by
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teaching
correct ways of
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presentation
at schools.

To put in a nutshell,
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teaching
giving speeches at
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schools
is both rewarding and problematic, although having considered the logical points presented above, it could be
safely
concluded that its
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positive
points like saving time at university or learning this
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skill
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IELTS essay presentation in schools is good or bad?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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