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Ebooks and modern technology

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I agree with the fact that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. Technology has become such a pivotal part of mankind and it is almost very difficult to ignore its presence. It has been flourishing by leaps and bounds. Earlier, people used to get information about the things happening around the world from 4-5 pages of the newspaper. But it was just limited and hardly covered the news from all parts of the world. Now a days, with just a touch on the smartphone, people can have access to news from all around the world, which is also being constantly updated. Social media has also had a huge role to play in this. People usually don’t gravitate towards newspaper these days; paying for one seems such a waste of money. Instead, people rely on popular social media apps that give a concise, short yet informative piece of news, which is easier to read and understand. Furthermore, students, say even 5-6 years back, used to learn from books, as there was not a lot of spotlights on E-books those days. It was once said that a book was a man’s friend. But these days, technology has drastically changed a student’s life too, with the introduction of E books. Now students don’t have to carry heavy books in their back packs and don’t have to buy multiple expensive books to study. The internet has been helping students to get online versions of the same books, for the fraction of the price and also there is now less weight to carry around! One can access these books anywhere- on their smartphones, tablets and computers. Authors these days make use of this opportunity, to make their books look more aesthetic and illustrative, so that people will buy and read them more. In my opinion, we are just days away from losing our traditional newspapers and magazines, because people no longer find them useful. Technology has developed beyond one’s imagination and it is slowly taking over everything, making one’s life easier. This makes people more reliable on technology, rather than learning things the way it was earlier.
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Ebooks
and modern
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technology
will
totally
replace traditional
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newspaper
and magazines.
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Technology
has become such a pivotal part of mankind and it is almost
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very
difficult to
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ignore
its presence. It has been flourishing by leaps and bounds.

Earlier,
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people
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used
to
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get
information about the things happening around the world from 4-5 pages of the
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newspaper
.
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it was
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just
limited and hardly covered the news from all parts of the world.
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, with
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just
a touch on the smartphone,
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people
can have access to news from all around the world, which is
also
being
constantly
updated. Social media has
also
had a huge role to play in this.
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People
usually
don’t gravitate towards
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newspaper
these days; paying for one seems such a waste of money.
Instead
,
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people
rely on popular social media apps that give a concise, short
yet
informative piece of news, which is easier to read and understand.

Furthermore
,
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students
, say even 5-6 years back,
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used
to learn from
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books
, as there was not
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a lot of
spotlights on E-books those days. It was once said that a
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book
was a
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man
’s friend.
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But
these days,
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technology
has
drastically
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changed
a
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student’s
life too, with the introduction of E
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books
.
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Now
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students
don’t
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carry heavy
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books
in their back packs and don’t
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have to
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buy
multiple expensive
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books
to study. The internet has been helping
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students
to
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get
online versions of the same
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books
, for the fraction of the price and
also
there is
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now
less weight to carry around! One can access these
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books
anywhere- on their smartphones, tablets and computers. Authors these days
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make
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use
of this opportunity, to
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their
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books
look more aesthetic and illustrative,
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so
that
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people
will
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buy
and read them more.

In my opinion, we are
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just
days away from losing our traditional
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newspapers
and magazines,
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because
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people
no longer find them useful.
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Technology
has developed beyond one’s imagination and it is
slowly
taking over everything, making one’s life easier.
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This
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makes
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people
more reliable on
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technology
,
rather
than learning things the way it was earlier.
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IELTS essay Ebooks and modern technology

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
357 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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