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One of the effective methods to develop language skills of students is through providing feedback to them. However, there has been a debate whether language teacher should focus on offering positive feedback of decent works to students or is it better to indicate mistakes in their flaw works. Personally, I disagree with the idea that positive feedback is more important to focus than point out errors in works. First, an individual can improve and develop language skills when that person realizes what is his or her mistake so that a person knows where to begin and how much effort that person should put in to achieve goals. Sometimes, it is difficult to identify mistakes in your work without getting supports from high-skilled persons. Most people may become frightened or discouraged when they get criticized in their work, but this is how the process of learning functions. Therefore, you should feel appreciated and motivated when someone guide you through criticizing. It is almost impossible to get your work perfect all the time, thus make yourself comfortable with criticizing will benefit you in the future. Moreover, keep desiring only positive feedback can be like taking drugs. You obtain one yet still want more of them in next time, and you can be easily susceptible to negative feedbacks. Only single time of criticizing can bring you mental health down and make you feel against to learn anymore. People should deal with compliment carefully because it can lead to negative outcome rather than positive one in the long run. For these reasons, language teachers should help their student develop their skills by providing them an awareness of their own
One of the effective methods to develop
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of students is through providing
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feedback
to them.
However
, there has been a debate whether
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language
teacher should focus on offering
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positive
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feedback
of decent works to students or is it better to indicate mistakes in their flaw works.
Personally
, I disagree with the
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idea
that
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is more
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important
to focus than point out errors in works.

First
, an individual can
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improve
and develop
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language
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skills
when that
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person
realizes what is
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his or her
mistake
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so
that a
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person
knows where to
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begin
and how much effort that
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person
should put in to achieve goals.
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Sometimes
, it is difficult to identify mistakes in your
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work
without getting supports from high-skilled
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persons
. Most
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people
may become frightened or discouraged when they
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criticized in their
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,
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this is how the process of learning functions.
Therefore
, you should feel appreciated and motivated when someone
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guide
you through criticizing. It is almost impossible to
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your
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perfect all the time,
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yourself
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will benefit you in the future.

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desiring
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only
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positive
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can be like taking drugs. You obtain one
yet
still
want more of them in
next
time, and you can be
easily
susceptible to
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negative
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feedbacks
.
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Only
single time of criticizing can bring you mental health down and
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make
you feel against to learn anymore.
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People
should deal with compliment
carefully
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because
it can lead to
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outcome
rather
than
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one in the long run.

For these reasons,
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language
teachers should
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help
their student develop their
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skills
by providing them an awareness of their
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own
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IELTS essay positive feedback or criticising

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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