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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.

Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. PxDd
We can see the natural resources like rivers, lakes and seas are getting polluted on a daily basis and it's been a major concern for people who are trying to protect the environment. Water Pollution is mainly caused by the industrial waste of the factories and the release of the human waste and the household garbage into the nearest water resource such as ponds or lakes. The main reason of the water pollution is the industries that are being constructed near a lake, river or ponds to decrease the cost of transport to transport the garbage or the industrial waste to another place or dump yard. The unrecyled waste from the industrial may put them in danger so the industries and factories preffering a place beside a water resource for an easy and convienient way to getting rid of the industrial waste. These human waste and industrial mainly effects animal life than on human life because the release of waste and plastic in to the waste will change the texture of water making it undrinkable and unhealthy. Unlike animals, humans have may ways to get their water and purify them and they can get water from underground. Animals are getting affected not only by health but also they are getting struck by the bottle caps and different plastic things dying slowly in lack of food and water. These Pollution of water also affects humans adversely in the long run like the average age of living of a humans gets decreased. To my own experience, there is pond right infront of my house which used to have very good quality of drinking water and people used to bath in the pond. Due to a Restaurant setup at the pond, the release of the heavy cooking oil in to the pond made it undrinkable and people who bathe in that river got rashes and severe skin diseases. To Conclude, We will have long run effect of the water pollution and the extinction of the animals and birlds will highly effect the food chain.
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the natural resources like rivers, lakes and seas are getting polluted on a daily basis and it's been a major concern for
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people
who are trying to protect the environment.

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mainly
caused by the
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industrial
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waste
of the factories and the release of the
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human
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waste
and the household garbage into the nearest
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water
resource such as
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ponds
or lakes. The main reason of the
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water
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pollution
is the industries that are
being constructed
near a lake, river or
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ponds
to decrease the cost of transport to transport the garbage or the
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industrial
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waste
to another place or dump yard. The
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unrecyled
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waste
from the
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industrial
may put them in
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danger
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so
the industries and factories
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preffering
a place beside a
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water
resource for an easy and
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convienient
way to getting rid of the
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industrial
waste.

These
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human
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and
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mainly
effects
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life than on
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life
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the release of
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waste
and plastic in to the
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waste
will
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change
the texture of
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water
making it undrinkable and unhealthy. Unlike
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animals
,
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humans
have may ways to
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their
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water
and purify
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them and
they can
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get
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from underground.
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Animals
are getting
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not
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by health
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also
they are getting struck by the bottle caps and
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different
plastic things dying
slowly
in lack of food and
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water
. These
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Pollution
of
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water
also
affects
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humans
adversely
in the long run like the average age of living of a
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humans
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decreased.

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experience, there is
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right
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quality of drinking
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and
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people
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used
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to bath
in the
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pond
. Due to a Restaurant setup at the
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pond
, the release of the heavy cooking oil in to the
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pond
made it undrinkable and
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people
who bathe in that river
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got
rashes and severe skin diseases.

To Conclude
, We will have long run effect of the
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water
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pollution
and the extinction of the
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animals
and
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birlds
will
highly
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effect
the food chain.
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IELTS essay Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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