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Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in modern society. with that statement? 2Yjb
In present-day society there exist different kinds of school. It is only a matter of choice and financial capacity which school children will be sent to, whether public, private or a foreign educational institution. However, a limited number of parents prefer to educate their sons and daughters at home due to serious reasons. Firstly, there are parents whose children have become subjects to violence. As a result, their child is traumatized and refuses to go to school again. In turn, their parents are so stressed and frightened that they are forced to provide studying at home. They either use the services of paid tutors or, in case they are knowledgeable enough, they themselves teach their boys and girls. Secondly, some parents’ beliefs are in total clash with the school curriculum. Sadly, in too many countries, if not all, students are not taught the real history and the content of history books is changed periodically depending on the party which holds power. Unfortunately, student books are full of distortions and deliberate inaccuracies, either intended to brainwash young minds or to affect their behavior negatively. Social media users often see that parents post parts of their children’s textbooks in order to alarm society and make authorities take the necessary measures. In conclusion, I do believe that home education is not only an option in cases of school bullying, but it is also completely acceptable as long as the children studying that way can take their exams and prove they have the same skills and knowledge, if not better, as their peers.
In present-day society there exist
different
kinds of
school
. It is
only
a matter of choice and financial capacity which
school
children
will be
sent
to, whether public, private or a foreign educational institution.
However
, a limited number of
parents
prefer to educate their sons and daughters at home due to serious reasons.

Firstly
, there are
parents
whose
children
have become subjects to violence.
As a result
, their child
is traumatized
and refuses to go to
school
again. In turn, their
parents
are
so
stressed
and frightened that they
are forced
to provide studying at home. They either
use
the services of paid tutors or, in case they are knowledgeable
enough
, they themselves teach their boys and girls.

Secondly
,
some
parents’
beliefs are in total clash with the
school
curriculum.
Sadly
, in too
many
countries, if not all, students are not taught the real history and the content of history books is
changed
periodically
depending on the party which holds power. Unfortunately, student books are full of distortions and deliberate inaccuracies, either intended to brainwash young minds or to affect their behavior
negatively
. Social media users
often
see
that
parents
post parts of their
children’s
textbooks in order to alarm society and
make
authorities take the necessary measures.

In conclusion
, I do believe that home education is not
only
an option in cases of
school
bullying,
but
it is
also
completely acceptable as long as the
children
studying that way can take their exams and prove they have the same
skills
and knowledge, if not better, as their peers.
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IELTS essay Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in modern society. with that statement?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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